- So Jerold thinks he can help the Longbottoms, nice.
- I enjoyed the fanfic a great deal. Plenty of fun, drama, convolution to keep it interesting.
You have used tirelessly (unlimited energy) when I thought you wanted tiredly (limited or small energy).
Why all the kindly's? In the canon only Dumbledor used the word. And to much repetition can be irritating and/or boring.
Is "One Kat never runs away if she did something she knows she will get in trouble with" supposed to be "One Kat never runs away if she did "not do" something she knows she will get in trouble with"?
Anyway, thanks for a interesting and fun read. I definataly want to see where go with this.
May the MUSE be with you!!!
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