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The Blackest Potter
(#) ChiVayne 2007-06-09
Very nice. I wonder if Lucius will buy off the ministry just to face Voldie's wrath (not only did he do something too public, but he also FAILED, or will he figure Azkaban may be the lesser of two evils.The Blackest Potter
(#) hoser41 2007-06-09
I really like the tone and pace of this story. I especially liked the part with Harry being taught how to make his own wand. And I really liked the battle scene at the end. It's not often that you see a Harry that will use dark spells, however reluctantly.The Blackest Potter
(#) dmc001 2007-06-09
Very good stuff!! I really liked the part of making harry´s wand, it was very well done. And the fight at the end was very good too, you showed a harry with believable abilities.The Blackest Potter
(#) Cateagle 2007-06-09
chuckle Now, -that- is the way to make an entrance into the wizarding world. I suspect Lucius is not going to appreciate it when he finds out who did it and relations with the DE spawn at Hogwarts are going to be "frosty", at a minimum. OTOH, I'm willing to bet that Lavender will definitely persuade the other gryffs to side with him, no matter what House he ends up in.The Blackest Potter
(#) Nautilus 2007-06-09
nice to see flitwick in the action. harry could learn alot from him. especially dueling style and tricks, even if flitwick in not willing to use some of the darker arts...
at bit cliche with killin of the damsel's parents... but i look forward to where you take it...
nice flashback... the wands were explained nicely. and i never really liked how more cores meant stronger wizard, kinda stupid... so i liked ur idea.
update soon, this and all ur other stories as well, congrats.The Blackest Potter
(#) Nautilus 2007-06-09
nice to see flitwick in the action. harry could learn alot from him. especially dueling style and tricks, even if flitwick in not willing to use some of the darker arts...
at bit cliche with killin of the damsel's parents... but i look forward to where you take it...
nice flashback... the wands were explained nicely. and i never really liked how more cores meant stronger wizard, kinda stupid... so i liked ur idea.
update soon, this and all ur other stories as well, congrats.The Blackest Potter
(#) Nautilus 2007-06-09
nice to see flitwick in the action. harry could learn alot from him. especially dueling style and tricks, even if flitwick in not willing to use some of the darker arts...
at bit cliche with killin of the damsel's parents... but i look forward to where you take it...
nice flashback... the wands were explained nicely. and i never really liked how more cores meant stronger wizard, kinda stupid... so i liked ur idea.
update soon, this and all ur other stories as well, congrats.The Blackest Potter
(#) DavidMPotter 2007-06-10
What an awesome beginning to a fic! I so look forward to more of this story.
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