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Chapter the Eighth
5 reviewsTrust can be a hard thing to gain, and even harder to keep, but sometimes it is worth the continuing struggle
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A New Twist
(#) Theresa599 2007-06-17
Hey me again and i finally get on ficwad and it keeps going down on me oh well I think i'll put this story on alerts so i'll know when it's updateed.Update song LOVE IT IN MY FAVE'S.A New Twist
(#) Senney 2007-06-24
Oh wow, this is definitely the best Theresa//Archie story out there. I really like the looks into their minds with the bolded consciences, its a nice perspective. I do think, however, that you need a bit more negative insight on their 'relationship' from Jay and Atlanta. Not to show them as bad guys, but to give us more of a reason to want them to be toghether, ya know? Convert the non believers!
Anyways, great job, great story, and from now on I'll review every chap.
LOVE YOU!
SenneyA New Twist
(#) iheartyou07 2007-07-04
HOORAAHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
AND HAPPY [belated!!] CANADA DAY! ♥
Hell yeah. Now that was a chapter you know I read more than once =] I love how Theresa went over and got into his "bed". I love the fact that they're getting so touchy-touchy. hehehe. Oh god, I love this whole thing. But I want more Jay Jealous Timeee. lol. And more AT moments. But you will never have enough, because I'm just that greeddyy:D I can't wait until they finish school and their summer starts... ooh, summer arrangments. I know you've already got a twist planned for that, and i can't wait. they're going to be living together:D yayyy. But what do her dreams mean? I'm sure I'll find out soon enough though, lol. ahh, seems like Atlanta's already got everything figured out... oo, maybe Archie&Jay should talk before the whole moving in thing. and then they argue. and then Archie hits Jay with a really good comeback//comment. heheh, and Jay feels like he's just been bitchslapped. hahah, that's just me and my little AT fantasyy. ignore me =] but not my more AT moments comment. you can't ignore that. ever.♥ yyeah, i'm done.
but Jen, before I start to blabber [as though I haven't already:D], I will leave you with the usual i-hate-you-and-your-stupid-talent-but-plleeasseee-keep-writing-for-us-because-we-love-you-anyways, and hopefully you'll update soon!
♥
P.S. AT MOMENTS!
P.P.P.S. ^more AT MOMENTS!!
P.P.S. I swear I'm done this time. ♥A New Twist
(#) Atlanta101 2007-07-21
hi
i am usually a Archie and Atlanta fan but thisstory was one of the best T and A stories i have read.Great job.
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