- it's official. i am a fan of your works! this is incredible, again. it definitely DID NOT crash and burn, and i loved the rose & jack thing, where brendon was like 'well if you squint...' and then the whole 'you're hot, you're hotter, and i'm hottest' XD and the perfect tie-up at the end just PROVES you're the master of one-shots.
you're going on my favorite list :)
- "Look, Ross, why do you have to be so goddamn smart all the time?"
"Because you two are dumbasses."
really loved that part!!
loved the story. its so cute and poor Jon.
boogeyman! great reference.
the guys singing Celine Dion is fucking hilarious.
Better than Brendon singing Baby One More time.
i liked the third part best.
the fourth one was pretty good too. Loved Brendon's idea of Hot, Hotter and Hottest.
(#) axelflames 2008-05-18This story is f*ckn’ funny! Absolutely love the way you broke it up into different parts but still keep some things the same like Brendon and Ryan’s “relationship” the way you used different types of rain like spring rain, thunder storms, and early morning rain that was awesome. The fact that you used Jon was original in its self no one does that including me. I believe your writing is so good because it’s so realistic, I could actually imagine the guys being like this doing and saying these things and I don’t know them. That’s how realistic the story you paint is. Even though the entire story is incredible it’s the end of the last part that I fancy the most.
And suddenly, all his fears and worries disappeared and there was no place in the world Jon would have rather been than right next to his best friends on a couch in a cabin in the middle of nowhere.
Maybe Jon Walker didn't really love life more when the rain fell. He simply knew that when it came, his friends would always be there to help him forget it.
This is just genies no other way to put it.
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