- interesting so far.... i have seen some fics with another soul or mind sharign harry's body, but this is a bit differnt... look forward to where you take it...
i love jean's character in X-men, along with rouge... so i look forward to whatever you come up with here...
i was thinking abou using the lack of power control, as the end of my story. harry would - in his vengeance - lose control, and do pretty much Jean did in the end of X-men 3.
killing not only voldy, but the ohters as well...
- What a great start to the story, I like the fight between Harry and Bella... where his ture magic is awakened... I like the idea of this; 'Bella quickly cast another crucio at Harry only to gasp as he waved it aside as if it were nothing.' I like what Harry did to her and the Death Eaters.
The fool Albus, he knew this day would come, so why didn't he help Harry to control it from the beginning. And the Aurors are fool, they never attack someone who is showing that they are more powerful then them.
I wonder what else Albus was hiding from Harry?
- Hello, My name is Carol and I am a retired English Composition Teacher. I love Harry Potter and since I am crippled I really do not have much to do. Now as to your story. I will say that it is well concieved and extremely interesting. A similiar but not indentical story existes on Fanficauthors.net so it will be interesting to see how the two stories compare and contrast as they develop. I do like your concept and your expression of the original manifestation of Harry's Power. Keep the trilogy developing.
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