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Chapter 34
20 reviewsThe group go to lunch, Bob reprimands Cheyenne and Jamia takes a late night drive.
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(#) WynonaKing90 2007-06-25
holy fucking shit!!!!
your writting is brilliant!!!
i am seriously amazed at how your story makes me laugh/ shout out/ cry...
damn. this has to be my fav. story. and may i just say that chey dissing lyn at the begening was awesome xD. haha. it made me laugh so hard. PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!!!
i want to see if gerard does come crawling to her. the suspence is killing me.
asjdfhjghgj!!!!
i cant wait for the next chapter.Forbidden
(#) Sorrows 2007-06-25
yeash, no one can resist those eyes wicked laugh lol
i swear, when i saw that you had updated, i almost started dancing, that's how happy i got :) and i barely ever dance. haha!
i loved it when cheyenne was dissing lyn! amazingly written :) now all i can do is hope that lyn falls off a rollercoaster and breaks all the bones in her body or something. zany! :)
kick-ass chapter! update soon
xxxxForbidden
(#) AlexSanDee 2007-06-25
Leave comments and funny things? Ok let's see...Comment: I love this story but you already know that. As for funny things will some days I say lots of funny things even if I don't mean them to be. My favorite funny in this story was Lynn's name for Jamia (LockNess-tor monster) That is classic. OK I'm ready for Jamia to take her down. That woman needs taking down. Will Gerard fall for her evil ways? Well he is a guy...and sorry but I think we know what part of their anatomy they think with. More soon and no excuses little missy!!!Forbidden
(#) rejected_smurf_god 2007-06-25
I love this story sooooo much!! Keep writing and thinkin of your funny little ideas that make it so awesome. I still totally support the idea of a girl fight.
Sarah :)Forbidden
(#) MCR_ToTheEnd 2007-06-25
NOOO!!! Update quickly, but don't get fired!! If you don't have a job, then you won't get money, if you don't have any money, then you can't pay for your internet service, if you don't have any internet service, then you can't update!!Forbidden
(#) cutegirl12356 2007-06-25
OMG....okay i'm not that funny lol...but the chapter was great....MORE...as always...and would you be okay with a HUG and a COOKIE!!!...LOL..gives cookie...OMG...I forgot the MILK...LOL! Was that funny? I hope it was!Forbidden
(#) zaberdeenz 2007-06-26
awwww-di-ty.(yes,I make up silly words, pretty often even)GIMME A J..GIMME AN A..and so on..GOOOOOO JAMIAAAAAA! victorydance Bobdammit that woman is awesome! Le dirt is sooo gonna get her ass owned by Jamia, right? please? lol.
Geetard concerns me though. He's a man. Even if he's a smart man, man nevertheless.So yeah, i'm just hoping he would think with his brain instead of lil bro. crosses fingers
YOU KEEEEPS THIS COMING.Forbidden
(#) SweetRevenge504 2007-06-26
DUUUDE..I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SOO LONG.
thanks for updating.
DO IT AGAIN!! =DAuthor's response
I'm trying, I'm trying.
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