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We're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) trueLIEx3 2007-06-30
You're a genius. Seriously.
QUOTES!
"This time, he felt differently. This was war." Man, that's awesome. It's such a huge change and brings on so many opportunities! And they're both so damn stubborn; neither will admit what they feel. Pssh.
"Just because I have a thick head doesn't mean that...that...I'm stupid..." Man, that's hilarious. xD.
AND! "I didn't know where you went...and I'm...well...I was...lovesick, I guess." That is a fantastic way to describe it. Jeez, so I take back what I said earlier; right there it that phrase, Brendon just basically confessed his love for her. Alice is the one with the thick head. x|.
Anyway, amazing chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next [and I am SO glad it's a triology!].We're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) tacku 2007-06-30
"Brendon, I do not want escargot! Nor do I want beer! I just want you to fucking understand that-"
that sentence was a laugh and a half lolz great chapter, as usual and i can't wait for the next one :DAuthor's response
Lol! Thank you...I actually really like escargot, and I was horribly hungry while writing that part so I was thinking of all the yummy things that could possibly come to mind. (Exception of beer since I'm not of age to drink it, lol.)
I can't wait for your next review! Thanks for reviewing!
xoxo nat.We're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) Geets 2007-07-01
Wow, dude, amazing. I can't believe she just turned up! Why the hell didn't she just tell Brendon where she was?! I find it d=so stupid when people do that, lol. So other than the "war" going on, my favourite part was when Liz says "Yeah. I'm telling you, with that hothead Brendon and temperamental Alice, I'm pretty sure neither of them will be very happy once they see one another's state." That was so funny, lol. And quite true really...
I loved it a lot, but I cannot believe it's almost OVER!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOO! Why are you ending it?!?!?!? Grrr evil eyes lol. Just make it good :D Geets xxAuthor's response
I know...someone mentioned in their review last chapter, 'Where's Alice? Can she come back now?' I was like oops...I was meant to have her gone for awhile, but it seemed I went on forever having her GONE. But you know, there ARE people out there who 'want to protect their loved ones' by leaving them 'not knowing' where they're going.
Maybe I'm telling you too much. I probably am.
It's not nearly over! It's a threequel, remember? ;) wink wink nudge nudge.
xoxo nat.
PS i always look forward to your reivews :) i'm like WHERE'S GEETS?! lol.We're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) Life_is_42 2007-07-01
wow. bden is on the war path! it's smexyful. jk i know he's yours. :D
so...memmos! (memerable moments combined...)
"Who?" Alice asked tiredly. She was so tired...she had rings, dark rings, under her eyes, and it was obvious that it wasn't makeup that was smudged. It was actually her looking like a ghost. Her face was pallid except for the dark rings. Her hair was pulled into a messy bun, and even then, her hair had a bit of dandruff and stringiness to it. All in all, Alice could have been described as a zombie.
i feel as if i look like that sometimes XD i have DAYS like that. but woo hoo. poor alice. you do such great descriptions.
Brendon looked to Ryan, who was already pushing Sarah and Liz out, saying, "Come on, let's just leave 'em alone. Let's phone Jon and Spencer to tell 'em that Alice is back or something..." and sounds of protests of Sarah yelping, "But this is the good part!" and then a response of Liz mumbling, "I've been telling you guys over and over again that the both of them will start arguing in two seconds..."
Lol! you're awesome at humor! just the right amount to go along with the angstyier bits. it flows together so nicely. honestly i'm jealous of your writting abilities! my writting turns fluffy and cliche, i wish i could write like you, i honestly do!
luve you.
send the love to the boys too.
xoxo
Liz and JonAuthor's response
Best descriptions come from experiences. XD That's why YOUR fics rock...they always come from something experienced. (haha, it was just for the experience...har har har...sorry I'm laughing at myself lol.)
Thanks for reviewing! Glad you're back. waves at Jon
xoxo nat.We're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) KatieLove 2007-07-02
"Brendon, you never made our relationship clear from the start. What are we? Husband and wife? Boyfriend and girlfriend? Lovers? I don't even know! Why are you making such a big deal out of this when we haven't even defined step one of our relationship?"
I LOVE ALICE.
And this story. There are hurdles in relationships and I love how you take us to each one.Author's response
Haha...thank you. Thank you for reviewing critically...like how you said that I take you guys to each hurdle in a relationship.
Which is funny, because I've never been in one (a relationship) before.
xoxo-nat.We're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) peterpandacomplex 2007-07-03
"I got a fever, and I just woke up in the hospital not too long ago. See what happens when you leave me here alone?"
There's Brendon for you, he never fails to make jokes even at the worst times.
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