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• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) ClandestineUnited 2007-07-03

  Loved it. I can't believe Pete, that's so sad.
  Sara was hilarious before she went into labor - I couldn't stop laughing.
  Update soon!

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) fobgal1 2007-07-03

  I'm gonna kill Pete.
  And if he cheated on Sara with Ashlee then I'm gonna burn his body lol.
  Sara cracks me up.
  Please update soon.

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) watch_the_sky 2007-07-03

  sara is by far my favorite character of this story but i am absolutely astonished by the outcome of this update. im also glad to see the story taking a twist towards other characters plot lines, it was very nice. as always, you're the best, keep up the fantastical work.

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) patricksgirl84 2007-07-03

  Excellent. Love it!

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) Gangsta_Girl 2007-07-04

  I thought it was a nice turn of events-switching the focus to Sara. All I could think was "Where the hell is Pete!" And the intro of Ashlee? I am so curious as to where you're taking this. I'm so excited for the next part! This story is so captivating. I just don't know how you do it! You're awesome, if I may say so. :)

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-07-05

  Wow, I was totally moved by this chapter because under it's treacherously funny banter, there was a really dark issue...Pete and Sara are over (?). It was so devastating and who wants to go through a birth without the arse who put it in there.
  
  You're right, it isn't always about katrick, you're ability as a diverse author reminded us of that.
  
  I wait with baited breath.
  
  I love you.
  x

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-07-05

  Wow, I was totally moved by this chapter because under it's treacherously funny banter, there was a really dark issue...Pete and Sara are over (?). It was so devastating and who wants to go through a birth without the arse who put it in there.
  
  You're right, it isn't always about katrick, you're ability as a diverse author reminded us of that.
  
  I wait with baited breath.
  
  I love you.
  x

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) Melim 2007-07-05

  Alright, so review 200 so you can stop complaining and being so OCD about it. The chapter was sad, and it depressed me after I read it, but it was still good. I have no idea what's going to happen now, but I'm sure it's going to be amazing. And I still love Sara..

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) danceislife 2007-07-05

  oo he's in deep now....
  
  "Alright so here's the thing -"
  
  "We have to take our clothes off; we have to party all night long."- HILARIOUS

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) ssketchator 2007-07-06

  OH NO!!!!!!!!!!
  
  I accidentally put a 1 at the end of that. I contemplated leaving it, but decided I'm fangirly enough everytime someone even mentions a Patrick, so...
  
  I might kill Pete. He's been wonderful through most of this and here he is, letting his pregnant wife drop a baby on the highway while he's off cavorting with Ashlee motherfucking Simpson.
  
  Is cavorting a word? I thought it was but now I'm not so sure.
  
  In happier news, the whole monk scene made me laugh.

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