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• Master of the Game.

  (#) xharlequingirl 2007-07-04

  oh my god, stop killing my heart! wonderfully written. but i say this with all of the love i have for you. YOU SUCK! haha. ILY.

• Master of the Game.

  (#) fobgal1 2007-07-04

  You just ripped my heart out.
  Patrick doesn't deserve this.
  He deserves to be happy with Amanda.
  Bring her back!
  Ah cue the tears.
  Please update soon.

• Master of the Game.

  (#) redsoxchick92 2007-07-04

  Aw poor Patrick, everything was going perfect for him.
  This chapter seriously made me cry
  I know how he feels,a few months ago my sister's best friend died from a car crash.

• Master of the Game.

  (#) ssketchator 2007-07-04

  I'm so sad now. Which makes you a good writer but me a bummed-out lady.
  
  Ahh! I have no words to tell you how wonderful this chapter was.

• Master of the Game.

  (#) patricksgirl84 2007-07-04

  God, this is so sad. Your writing is the best!

• Master of the Game.

  (#) Jinxeh 2007-07-04

  Hello there! I came upon this story by happenstance last night, and was up until after three AM reading it...I just finished catching up to it today, and just...wow. This is truly wonderful writing; you have a decent grasp on spelling and grammar, and while the female OCs seem just a bit Sue-ish (they're all described as being very pretty/beautiful, long legged, etc) you don't really spend any time bringing that up time and time again, or reminding us of them. The OCs blend in seamlessly with the canon characters we know and love, and their tangled, interweaving storylines work together very, very well. Your dialogue doesn't seem forced, your humor is spot on, and the emotions seem /real/.
  
  I've been wanting to write a Patrick-centered FOB story for a while, and then when I saw Knocked Up at the movies, I had the sudden thought to write a fic very close to what this one is like; I thought Patrick would be the perfect character for it. But now that I've gone through and read this, I doubt I could do any better of a job; this is a truly captivating, and well-written story, so there's no use in even trying.
  
  I love Amanda's death, because it's handled in a way that's more realistic than the typically cliched things you normally find in fics to be found in fandoms involving rock bands. (You know what I mean; tragic deaths at the side of their lovers, lots of hospital angst, tearful, cliche dying words...that sort of thing.) But Amanda's death in this story is just so sudden, and pointless...it's just like deaths are in real life.
  
  I commend you on doing such a wonderful job with this story, and can't wait to read more!

• Master of the Game.

  (#) GoogleGeek 2007-10-18

  Wow. That's all I can really say right now. Wow. Amazing.

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