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• We're Both On Borderline Obsession

  (#) tacku 2007-07-04

  my memorable moment, if i have to pick just one because to be honest there were several was...
  "Alice, though, became the wax, and Brendon was the fire. He slowly burned her out, melted her underneath him. Alice complied, and didn't actually complain. Their hot, passionate make-out slowed down, and they came to run out of oxygen. Soon it was a soft, romantic kiss."
  that was beautifully and eloquently written and i can't wait for more as usual :D

  Author's response

  Haha...Wow. Haven't had two people one quote at the same time yet...thank you so much for thinking I can write eloquently! I've never thought of myself that way! (And I should probably walk away from the laptop now to stop my ego from growing now haha.)
  But really, thanks.
  And your review (like everyone elses) has just made me want to speed up the process of updating the next couple chapters!
  Cheers!
  xoxo-nat.

• We're Both On Borderline Obsession

  (#) Life_is_42 2007-07-04

  ...Is it humiliating to be in a close relationship with me? Is that what you're saying? - Brendon
  
  idk why this stuck out at me so...maybe because it's like..wow..alice think before you say stupid stuff!
  
  but they kissed! yes! Dances happy dance
  
  and why do you hate this chapter? it's GOOD! your chapters are always good. really good. XD
  
  love you...i'm starting a short story..or book..or something...and i'm updating soon
  
  XOXO
  Lizzle

  Author's response

  Aw, I know...I was like, damn, I'm making Alice into a real bitch! Haha. Oh well, right? Some people say that guys make all the mistakes in a relationship...well. lol.
  Thank you for reassuring me...I think I was having a bad tummy ache and I wasn't concentrating on the chapter I was typing. (I was WAY distracted, believe me!)
  YAY! You're writing! You're gonna update!
  I NEED A LIFEY STORY.
  xoxo-nat.

• We're Both On Borderline Obsession

  (#) trueLIEx3 2007-07-04

  ARE YOU KIDDING? This is definitely one of my favorites. That was 'effing hilarious in the beginning. And the last part? FINALLY. w00t!
  Quotes:
  "He obviously didn't get very far before he felt a good punching to the balls. He cried, 'oof!' and sank to the ground. Because he was occupied with, well, trying to get back up and to recuperate, the reporters walked around-and all over him-to get a response out of Alice now." LMFAO. I love you.
  "Brendon was still groaning, rolling about on the floor." Man, I can totally imagine that. xD.
  "Face it Urie. Your life's just retarded." LOL. Loved that line. xD.
  "except for a few nearby trailers...which would hurt Brendon's knuckles immensely if he hit them, and he certainly didn't want to end up like Pete when he got mad about one of his girlfriends." LOL. Again. Man, you were on a roll.
  "Alice, though, became the wax, and Brendon was the fire. He slowly burned her out, melted her underneath him. Alice complied, and didn't actually complain. Their hot, passionate make-out slowed down, and they came to run out of oxygen. Soon it was a soft, romantic kiss." I love the simile in there. =).
  Overall, amazing chapter. Definitely one of my favorites, so don't fret, okay? Fantastically written!

  Author's response

  Recently, you have been one of my most FAVORITE reviewers...you just make me smile whenever you post memorable quotes! I'm really proud and happy that you, out of all people, really just (benefitted?) as a reviewer...
  This made my 4th of July really happy. Thank you SO much for reviewing!
  xoxo-nat.

• We're Both On Borderline Obsession

  (#) KatieLove 2007-07-04

  But before Alice could respond-or retort in this case-Brendon slammed her back into the steel wall of his trailer. He held his hand around the back of her head, though, to prevent any harm that would be caused to her head during the slamming. Quickly, lips crashed on lips, and electric waves were spread throughout both of their bodies. Brendon controlled her, while Alice-at first-squirmed beneath his touch.
  
  Oh. My. Whatever governs the universe. All that pent up... everything.
  I'm pretty much happy now.

  Author's response

  HAHAHA...I'm really happy that's how you feel about the chapter! I think...whoever/whatever governed the universe at the time I typed this chapter...pretty much knew what you wanted from this story.
  I'm pretty much happy too. You're one helluva dedicated reviewer to my story. :)
  xoxo-nat.

• We're Both On Borderline Obsession

  (#) peterpandacomplex 2007-07-06

  "I've directed him the way I imagined Bren-I mean, the way I imagined Tommy to be."
  
  Not my favorite qoute but I just wondered if any of the reporters caught on to that. Now on to my favorite qoute
  
  "You know, just to let you know...I don't hate you. I've told you already. I really like you. In fact, I think I love-"
  
  "Love me?" Alice smirked. She seemed to have recovered from her initial guppy-ness. Both of them were fighting to explain, to talk first, to take the lead in the conversation. Alice hissed, "Excuse me, but I think you're lying."
  
  I wanted to put another part but it was put down already and I try to put down qoutes I like but haven't been typed already.
  
  Alice seethed, "Didn't mean to what? Embarrass me? Publicly, too? What is your problem, Brendon? Are you PMSing? I thought only girls did that."
  
  OUCH. Brendon thought to himself, before he went on to clear his throat
  
  I liked this part too.

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