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• Discrepancy

  (#) jessieh213 2007-07-05

  I really like the story.
  Keep it going.

  Author's response

  Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you like the story,
  
  Charley xxx

• Discrepancy

  (#) ClandestineUnited 2007-07-05

  This is great, brilliant first chapter.
  Can't wait for more.

  Author's response

  Thanks for your compliments (though I'm not entirely sure I deserve them). I'm glad that you like it, the plot seemed so cliched to me.
  
  Charley xxx

• Discrepancy

  (#) fobgal1 2007-07-05

  Well this is very interesting.
  I can't wait for more.
  Please update soon.

  Author's response

  I'm glad you think it's interesting ^-^ I'll try and update as soon as possible :) Thanks for reviewing.
  
  Charley xxx

• Discrepancy

  (#) missfiona 2007-07-05

  definitely an interesting premise for a story - very original.
  I can't wait to find out why patrick hates her, and what happened in between the party and her bedroom.
  do update soon.

  Author's response

  Thanks for reviewing :D And you'll find out why Patrick dislikes her soon enough and what happened between the party and her bedroom is coming soon too. I'll try and update as soon as I can.
  
  Charley xxx

• Discrepancy

  (#) ssketchator 2007-07-05

  Ooh I like it I like it I like it.
  
  The memory lapses intrigue me, can things like that actually happen?
  
  And why does Patrick hate her?
  
  I can't wait to read more. Which means post more. Please and thank you.

  Author's response

  I'm glad you like it. I don't think that the memory lapses are possible but I don't know, I just sort of made them up and it took lots of Wikipedia researching to do.
  Thanks for reviewing,
  
  Charley xxx

• Discrepancy

  (#) xSoMeOnEx 2007-07-05

  loved the story. pretty original and your writing is excellent.
  
  update soon!

  Author's response

  I'm so glad that you think my writing is excellent :) Thanks for reviewing and I'll try and update as soon as possible.
  
  Charley xxx

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