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Are you perspiring from the irony?
(#) someonestilllovesyou 2007-07-06
i love this story! i can't wait for an update!Are you perspiring from the irony?
(#) Mixerrr 2007-07-06
Dude, that dialogue didn't suck at all. It was really heartfelt and dramatic, yet realistic at the same time. You've got a great talent. Loved the update. Keep it up =]Are you perspiring from the irony?
(#) rainydaykid13 2007-07-06
That was amazing.
I don't think I've ever seen anything so well written.
I think a lot of people have the hardest time writing something so dramatic, so...
There's not even a word to describe it!
I feel bad for Pete, and that was just amazing, heart wrenching to read.
It was almost as though I were right there watching him.
Major kudos, a lot of people would have had a hard time even coming close to that.
You did it without a hitch.
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I can't wait for another chapter.Author's response
you make me blush. :)Are you perspiring from the irony?
(#) hips-n-hearts86 2007-07-06
I absolutely loved how Pete reacted to finding out she was preggers...brilliant!
I wish she would of had the kid and rubbed it in his face though LOL but alas that didn't happen.
Will we get to meet "Christopher" anytime soon? I'm hoping so! lol
you know the usual..update soon and yada yada yada...ps. I would rate you but I'm outta points sniff..I owe you one :(Are you perspiring from the irony?
(#) glindapsawyer 2007-07-07
i really like this. it has substance. it's not just fan girly and what not. thus far it's very well written and i enjoy, despite the fact that i'm not the biggest pete fan. :)Are you perspiring from the irony?
(#) loversintomonsters 2007-07-07
i don't think your dialogue is weak at all.
nice chapter, lady.
srsly. collaboration. soon.
oh, and an update from you.Author's response
definitely. we need to talk.Are you perspiring from the irony?
(#) ssketchator 2007-07-08
Your dialogue was excellent. I really felt the emotion behind it, and it was realistic, something I could imagine someone actually saying.
Therefore, dialogue is not your weak point.
I don't know what your weak point is.
Which is a lame way of saying, you are incredible and I would love a new chapter.
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