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Unhand The Store Clerk
3 reviewsBeing charged for grievous bodily harm is not a good thing. Even if Mister I-Work-At-Wal-Mart refuses to let you buy your coffee.
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Discrepancy
(#) someonestilllovesyou 2007-07-07
ooh! i like this story!! update soon please!!!Author's response
I'll try and have the next chapter up and running as soon as I can. Thanks for reviewing :)
Charley xxxDiscrepancy
(#) ssketchator 2007-07-07
I do know the feeling... the lack-of-a-life versus the suddenly-have-a-live thing. Therefore I will forgive your erratic posts. As long as they're all as good as the past three.
I don't know what you're talking about, this chapter was excellent. I'm glad I finally found out why Patrick hates Charley, and I'm glad it's not because she beat him with a fish or anything so dramatic.
I loved the Stumph crack.
And Jeffers is an excellent name [as is Charley, while I'm on it]. I love girls with boy-ish names.Author's response
Yeah, I have a friend whose last name is Jefferson but she insists on being addressed by her Christian name. I am so uncreative when it comes to names so I use the names of people I know (or myself) LOL.
Charley xxxDiscrepancy
(#) fobgal1 2007-07-07
Loved it.
I think its kind of stupid that they hate each other because of stupid comebacks.
Please update soon.Author's response
Well, first of all, I'm glad you liked it. And about Patrick hating her... I needed something that wasn't too cliche (like her having dated him and then cheated on him) and something that reflected her character. She's a very grudgy person, totally unforgiving and immature.
I'll update when I can.
Charley xxx
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