- A bit confusing, but a really good basic plot. With a bit more details, it could be really good. But the way it jumps from thing to thing is a bit confusing, so just make the differences of scenes clear and you'll have a terrific story. Other than that, it was really good.
Author's responseThanks for reviewing. As such, this is only a trailer, kind of like a spoiler to the story, so you see what might happen, what is to happen and what has happened in the prequel which I am working on. I'm glad that you enjoyed this and I hope you enjoy the updates to come.
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