- It's definitely an interesting premise, but the shifting tenses (no offense, but it feels like you're fleshing out an outline and not being too careful about this) sometimes make it less enjoyable a read than it could be. The ending leaves lots of potential for sequels or further chapters; though how Harry & Hermione get involved with the Stargate effort is an open questions (given Harry's 'chaos attractor' nature, you know some event would link him there).
Author's responseI left it open in a way that people can continue with it in many different directions. And I know my grammer sucks :p
(#) HautFeuMaudit 2007-08-14A good starting point, Harry isn't dumb, Ron is an idiot, Ginny too and Hermione seems to use her brain.
I hope that, in the future, you will not make Harry the ultimate solution to all the universe problem, like him being able to beat the Wraith with a snap of his fingers...
I have always been a fan of HP/SG crossover, the interaction magic/technology, magic explanation by science (harnessing our surrounding energy), the Alterans/Wizards relations, Ascension, the bigs spaceships ^^...
Well, I hope you will make this a good story, I will check for updates.
Author's responseI am glad you like it, I was really buged by the last book. I don't have much time for this story because I am busy with my other stories. If I did continued with it I would have focused mostly on John and Harry learning about each other. Had no real plans of him going to Atlantis and detroying the wraith. If he did go he would have been part of the scientist. Harry would have the gene but Hermione wouldn't. When she gets the gene thearpy it doesn't take. I would not have wizards be long lost descendents of the Ancients.
- Well, I don't think that I've ever seen a HP/SGA crossover before. It might be interesting to see how this progresses and where it ends. For some reason, I've got a mental image of the Daedlus landing on the Hogwarts grounds at the climax of the tale. :-p
The idea that Dumbledore may have inadvertantly interfered with the main characters' relationships when he ensured they had the skills needed to beat Voldemort is an interesting one. I will certainly look in if you choose to write more.
(#) pacratjr1982 2008-09-06I just found your story have to say like the idea to bad stories like this never get finished. The only thing that I disliked about the story is Harry's name change. In many stories it comes to quick to aceppted. Why not make him magicly adopted by James so that it why the map says H.J.Potter when it shows his name that and since he has been H.J.Potter all his life he honers that and change his name to use both of his names. With Harry being the first name it has been his first name and is more than likely to respond to that than Evan. And do not have him give up his magical heritage in fact why not have him explore the powers he might have gained with the loss of the Horcrux. the powers he should have had if not for the Horcrux. like maybe he is a metamorphmagus for example not that he needs to be or any thing else.
Author's responseI clearly state that this story was a one shot and that I did not have plans to continue it.
As for the map you forget that James help create it so he can fool it by placing a charm on Harry.
Harry is also not giving up on his magic, just on being a part of the wizard community.
As for accepting the name change everyone associates Harry Potter with the boy who lived and then all the problems that came with it. By using a different name he is getting away from that. It also has been awhile since he learn about his true name and he doesn't use it in the wizarding world.
- This is awesome so far. I can't wait to see how you bring the two of them together. What about Sheppards parents? I believe they're alive. Are you going to bring them in? It would be great to give Harry more of a family. If they made out a separate birth certificate is his name differnt. Keep up the good work.
- plz plz plz I am begging you to update this. This is a great start to a great story. And you also had me fooled there too. I actually thought McKay would be his dad. Based on the episode he had with his sister and he is a brilliant scientist. And you hardly see sheppards intelligence.
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