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• The Day The Magic Died

  (#) Ithilwen 2005-12-21

  Wow. It sounds as though Harry really became a jerk over the years. What shall we see?
  
  What gets me is this: How could anyone manage to cast a single spell that could take away or block everyone's powers?
  
  This writing isn't up to your usual smoothness, Spore. You've got some word repetition going on.

• The Day The Magic Died

  (#) Ithilwen 2005-12-21

  Oh that explains it. You're not Nightspore. So, the word repetition about which I was speaking:
  You use the word "day" three times in the first paragraph, which is pretty short. The word "flick" or "flicked" also gets a little too much play. Etc.

• The Day The Magic Died

  (#) banner 2006-09-27

  Ha!
  Revenge is sweet...

• The Day The Magic Died

  (#) bloodalchemy 2006-12-17

  very bloody funny can't stop laughing

• The Day The Magic Died

  (#) Wolfric 2007-06-14

  Love it. W.

• The Day The Magic Died

  (#) jabarber69 2007-06-14

  Interesting story, but dont remember if this is completed or not. If not then you need to flesh it out a little like explain why or how harry got to the point he is at now!

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