- its cannon third task all over again.. lol... u used that nicely... i like the idea, or harry not fighting with voldy and winning again... and look forward to see what kinda a training harry does get, and what kinda rumors nev starts spreading around about harry and everything else...
otherwise, i liked those 3 chapters... just a question though, how many DE does voldy command...
Author's responseGlad you like it. Hopefully, the next chapters will give you answers. There are canon Death Eaters plus the ones I fictionally created.
- Amazing scape!! Really well done using the plan of Voldemort against himself! the bad guys always overestimate their cleverness.
I wonder if Neville or Tonks will coment about the title of "Lord" Harry was reciving, any way Harry make an excelent job of a imposible situation, besides now Voldemort lost his fortress to.
I can't wait to read the aftermath and to know if its posibel to wake up Dumbledore or not and what will the order do now with the several blows they get and the ones Harry do to the DE (and the posiblity of Harry comanding ALL the werewolves will be amazing).
Also I really hope to see some (a lot) of H/Hr moments, its a been a long time and I thing we deserve some smutt ;] .
Hope to read more soon.
Author's responseThanks. Glad you like it. You can bet Voldemort will go house hunting. The next chapters will shed light on Dumbledore, basically the aftermath of Neville's escape. Harry/Hermione still undecided.
- great chapters!!! very good! nice twists and turns.
sometimes a bit surreal how they waste their precious time with fooling around while escaping...
after reading these chapters, you have me rethinking my opinion of a harry/hermione-pairing....now tonks fits in very well...one of those two would be nice...
but as i'm a young male, i wouldn't say no to a threesome (harry/hermione/tonks) either...
hope it continues soon!
Author's responseThanks. Threesome? I'll keep it in mind. :D
- I really like how you have set up this story. It is really interesting how you've set up Harry as someone important, despite not being BWL. I do think that you are being far too lenient on Lily and James... I don't think Harry would forgive his parents so quickly, if at all. I know he hasn't fully forgiven them, but he has been too cordial towards them. These are the parents who abandoned him after all.
Other than that small complaint, I really like this fic and look forward to reading more.
Author's responseThanks. Harry is bitter with his parents. But, it doesn't affect him so much because his Uncle Max supplanted them as parent figure.
(#) Alohawannabe 2007-08-21Now that was a great escape ...nothing goes according to plan, everything hits the fan, and it's way too easy to be come sidetracked... ain't that just like reality? LOL!
I can almost see what's going to happen next. Everyone is going to be fussing over Neville and Amelia and Dumbledore while Moody, Tonks, and the others deal with Ferghus, and Harry is going to slip out unnoticed. And I know Tonks meant well, but her shooting him in the back in defense of Neville is just another nail in coffin for Harry's feelings toward the Wizarding World ...that he's expendable and doesn't really matter to the rest of them. Then Hermione goes looking for him. (sounds like a plan... lol)
Looking Forward To The Next Chapter
Author's responseThanks. And, thanks for a plot outline. I'll keep it in mind.
- WOOT!! awesome chapters, and i really hope you make harry finally unleash his anger on everyone for treating him like shite, he needs closure in the worst way. And i really hope neville gets his ass kicked again.
Author's responseThanks. Harry will kick ass. Or, his ass will be kicked. Either way, I haven't lined up the contestants yet.
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-08-27Interesting story. You've posted alot in a short period of time. I'm curious as to whether you have this posted elsewhere in a completed form.
Author's responseThanks. This story is only posted here at Ficwad. It's still work in progress.
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