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• Alice

  (#) Life_is_42 2007-08-21

  "will you be my girlfriend?" pause "please?"
  
  
  love it! xD brendon is such a sweet heart (well up until...coughs)
  
  and what's with chloe? wow. (i like that name though.)
  
  Anyways, you're such a good writter natalie. it's insane XD.
  
  i can't believe this is commming to an end sighs i guess we'll just have to find more inspiration for you. :)
  
  pulls brendon and zac into the room go inspire her!
  
  okay
  
  Later XD
  
  Lifey

• Alice

  (#) glindapsawyer 2007-08-21

  ah, sounds like such an awesome day.
  
  'Ex-friends ‘till the end?…She couldn’t see it that way either. They were definitely better off…as lovers.' - love the fall out boy reference.
  
  'Alice groaned inwardly. Men. ALways have to be so blunt...'
  
  i love everything about this chapter. it's just wonderful. even brendon being a brat when Spencer comes along at the park. :D

• Alice

  (#) numer45user 2007-08-22

  “When did we decide we were going to the park?” Alice asked mischievously. Brendon rolled his eyes, grabbed her hand, and pulled her out of the café. “Since I decided to. Duh.” Brendon said in his pretentious ultra-gay voice.
  
  hahahah this part made me laugh out loud hahah
  
  i love this story and im glad ficwad is back up. i was hoping you wouldnt forget the threequel.
  
  youre a good writer! keep it up!
  :)

• Alice

  (#) numer45user 2007-08-22

  “When did we decide we were going to the park?” Alice asked mischievously. Brendon rolled his eyes, grabbed her hand, and pulled her out of the café. “Since I decided to. Duh.” Brendon said in his pretentious ultra-gay voice.
  
  hahahah this part made me laugh out loud hahah
  
  i love this story and im glad ficwad is back up. i was hoping you wouldnt forget the threequel.
  
  youre a good writer! keep it up!
  :)

  Author's response

  Haha, I re-read this review just recently and it made me laugh too. It's nice when a reviewer points something out I don't notice when I write! Kudos to you, my friend! =)

• Alice

  (#) numer45user 2007-08-22

  ooooh sorry i posted that review twice. my internet was being slow so i clicked "submit" twice =\
  

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