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He Loves her. He Loves her not. He loves her. He...Loves her not? Well, He sure as hell loves hurting her.
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My Time Will Come....(Won't It?)
(#) pyrotechnicist 2007-08-24
yeh this is comming along well
i cant believe patrick was that mean
or that zaydee was such a pushover!
shame it took so long for this update
neway im looking forward to the next installment - keep it up ur writing well
xoxo
mollyMy Time Will Come....(Won't It?)
(#) Throw_away 2007-08-28
WOW I LOVE THIS STORY
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE
WELL DONE!My Time Will Come....(Won't It?)
(#) fobgal1 2007-08-28
Can I kill Pete and Patrick?
Pete is a douche and Patrick is just an ass.
I cant believe he said that about Zaydee.
Please update soon.My Time Will Come....(Won't It?)
(#) xxACoalminexx 2007-08-30
ahhh, no fobgal, because I'm gonna kill Patrick! I can't believe he was such an asshole!
Oh, by the way, I've been reading your story for a while...I just got around to posting now. I love it! You're an amazing writer. Update soon?My Time Will Come....(Won't It?)
(#) xxACoalminexx 2007-08-30
ahhh, no fobgal, because I'm gonna kill Patrick! I can't believe he was such an asshole!
Oh, by the way, I've been reading your story for a while...I just got around to posting now. I love it! You're an amazing writer. Update soon?My Time Will Come....(Won't It?)
(#) xxACoalminexx 2007-08-30
ahhh, no fobgal, because I'm gonna kill Patrick! I can't believe he was such an asshole!
Oh, by the way, I've been reading your story for a while...I just got around to posting now. I love it! You're an amazing writer. Update soon?Author's response
Hehe. You can hurt him, but don't kill him. =D
I'll update ASAP, thanks!
Hehe. You can hurt him, but don't kill him. =D
I'll update ASAP, thanks!
Hehe. You can hurt him, but don't kill him. =D
I'll update ASAP, thanks!
Hehe. You can hurt him, but don't kill him. =D
I'll update ASAP, thanks!My Time Will Come....(Won't It?)
(#) xxACoalminexx 2007-08-30
shit, i totally embarassed myself, sorry for the triple post =[My Time Will Come....(Won't It?)
(#) Syn_INC 2007-11-09
You officially made my 'Patrick can do no harm' bubble burst. He seems nice and all but honestly he is still a guy and human which means he is perfectly capable of doing idiotic things just like any other man on earth. What I wouldn't give to walk into the story and just smack him once real good for being so damn heartless. For such a young one you seem to know of the pains love can bring. Your story is very honest and very true to real life well atleast my life. I really like it. Hope you update it soon.
~K.R.Author's response
Glad you like it =)
Im trying to make this as realistic as possible.
I didn't want it to be all cliche and fake.
To be honest, I never been in love, but I have felt like my hearts been broken (unintentionally) and I also read alot. lol.
An Update is coming, and Thanks!
ZaydeeMy Time Will Come....(Won't It?)
(#) Mrs_Stump221 2007-12-27
ong i would like stab someone if they did that to me, but i am a emotional person i dont let people make me feel uncomfertable in my home, dont like me or who i am get the hell out.
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