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~*One Love*~
3 reviewsThere's a new girl in school named Megan who has a brother named Frank. Gerard is very in love in Megan and starts to turn bi because of her cute little brother. Mikey gets mad at Gerard for dating...
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~*One Love*~
(#) MusicLove 2007-08-25
Seeing as though you reviewed mine, i'll review yours ^.^
This is an awesome start. I'd be amazing if you carried it on because its something a bit different to all the other Frerard's I've seen. Keep up the good work ^.^~*One Love*~
(#) WynonaKing90 2007-08-26
i like the story line.
i think its awesome and original,
but i must say,
the dialouge is completely unrealistic.
i mean, in the begening, megan hugs gerard after saying two sentences to him??
and then frank HAS to mention how old his sister is turning to a complete stranger?
then, he just randomly asks 'whats your name?'.
no one in real life would ever do all those things, so it makes it hard to believe.
i dont mean this as an insult, but are you in 6th grade? im just wondering cause your writting level seems to be in about that age range.
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