Categories > Cartoons > Delilah and Julius > The Last Night
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The Last Night
(#) darks00 2007-09-01
Great story, Pands! I loved the lyrics. But there are some un-answered questions...Like, Delilah's bleeding bad, right? Why didn't Juls do anything to help her wounds? WOuldn't she need stitches or something? What happened to her father? Did he get caught by the police?
Besides those two un-answered questions, great story. Maybe a sequal? Well please continue making great storyes. :D
Darks, out. Hee hee.
xxDarkness' Kidxx
PS- I know I was backwards, but I read your AN last, LOL. I totally agree with every word you said. I have had an self-abusive AND tried to take her life. I hope you didn't do that, 'cause trust me, and like you said, it causes lots of pain. I'm a Jesus lover, too! So if there are some people making fun of you because you're Catholic, they'll have to make fun of me, too. :DThe Last Night
(#) twiinklestar 2007-09-02
YAY ! She's been saved! I'm Christian and I believe in Jesus so it's no problem. There's lots of people who believe in Jesus, but if people make fun of your for it then they're retarted. I think that Darks is right, you should make a sequel! Looking forward to it. Great job!
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