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Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) Wookie13 2007-09-04
I must say that I truely do love this story. It has been uninquely different in it's approach to magic, in general as different people or I should say different practises of magic have advantages and disadvantages depending on how you look at things. Templars and their melee approach to fighting compared to the distance that "normal" wizards take to fighting. If the normal wizards just had the templar mentality to killing then I don't believe that any dark wizard would live long enough to become a threat.
Great story.Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) Fireflashphoenix 2007-09-06
can i just point out that this isn't a super-harry story, as a super harry story requires that harry be more powerful and/or skilled than everyone else.
he is very powertful, but not moreso than many of the characters, it's his skill level that sets him apart, from the crowd - something i've being trying to find a way of putting into story form but failing so far.
keep up the good work, i look forward to future chaptersAuthor's response
Thanks for the kind words. Though people would argue that the first chapter made him out to be too strong...something I'm thinking about rewriting.
Anyway good luck with your stories. I'm not sure if this will help but when I try to write about the differance in skill level I try to keep in mind that no one is stuck at their level. As they fight and grow their experience will make them more dangerous. I try to portray that with the Death Eaters slowly becoming more dangerous for the Templar to deal with.Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) Fireflashphoenix 2007-09-06
can i just point out that this isn't a super-harry story, as a super harry story requires that harry be more powerful and/or skilled than everyone else.
he is very powertful, but not moreso than many of the characters, it's his skill level that sets him apart, from the crowd - something i've being trying to find a way of putting into story form but failing so far.
keep up the good work, i look forward to future chaptersHarry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) Fireflashphoenix 2007-09-06
can i just point out that this isn't a super-harry story, as a super harry story requires that harry be more powerful and/or skilled than everyone else.
he is very powertful, but not moreso than many of the characters, it's his skill level that sets him apart, from the crowd - something i've being trying to find a way of putting into story form but failing so far.
keep up the good work, i look forward to future chaptersHarry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) Shaggy37 2007-09-20
Outstanding Chapter!!!! I love this story. I can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter. I'm impressed with what you've done with the whole storyline and using cliche's and adding depth to them thats a very creative thing to do. Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)
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