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Within Temptation
(#) twiinklestar 2007-09-10
it doesnt suck ! i love it . you need to update . i love it . SEE WHAT YOU DO DELILAH ! geesh . can't you see that you don't belong with zack . you belong with JULIUS !Within Temptation
(#) Smiley02 2007-09-10
keep going update( it's nice to see someone updated can you update your other story "daddy where do babies come from" soon it's so good and I love it!
Within Temptation
(#) panda_1418 2007-09-12
Le gasp Now she KNOWS!! I forsee a confrontation, possibly an arguement ... and stop with the "I hope it doesn't suck"nessness because, my friend, nothing of yours ever sucks--
Which is why I say:
UPDATE SOON, YO!!Within Temptation
(#) rachh15 2007-09-16
LOL Like your stories could ever suck... I have loved all of your stories lol. Poor Julius! and Poor Delilah. ~UPDATE SOON~Within Temptation
(#) fruit_addict 2007-09-29
I almost cried :'(... gains composure anyways very well written girl. there was a part where it switched from first to second person and another part where it switched from past to present tense but that one wasn't as noticable. good job, off to read more.
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