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you can keep my brother
(#) MCR_music_mad_girl 2007-09-27
oooh kinky!
i like it !! =]
more soon please !! =]
Author's response
I'm really glad you liked it! usually my sex scenes are all blah...that's why there's not many of them...you can keep my brother
(#) winnie_55 2007-09-27
I loved this update, the argument they had about driving was funny. The sex scene was hot! lol. not uncomfortable at all!Author's response
oohh i just realized that i encouraged the stereotype that girls can't drive :( well what i really meant is that sky can't drive and she's just one girl...i know a lot girls who drive very well...umm..yes...girl power!! glad you liked it!you can keep my brother
(#) hopeanne 2007-09-28
Aw that last chap put you over 100 thousand words!~ Congrats! I think 100 is considered a novel... Im not sure...=/
Anyways. This site is driving me mad. I cant seem to get any alerts anymore and I just typed a whole big thing and clicked and it went back to the front page! =(
So im trying again...But now I forgot what I said.. Oh uhhh I liked how he knew exactly how to push her buttons. And I could totally sympathize with the whole being picked on for how you drive or should I say how you not drive kinda thing... Sometimes its just easier to let the guy drive... poor sky though. And your closing scene... I... Im just gonna send you a email on that one...
Author's response
I'm a shitty driver too, i just don't like it unless the road is empty so... yeah...i don't know about these sex scene, I'm really discouraged to write them, i don't think I'd write them anymore..maybe just the 4play, glad you liked the rest of the chap though...you can keep my brother
(#) bindie611 2007-09-28
Just read the whole story, and I thought it was really funny. For some reason, I like the really insane scenes better than all the drama, though I suppose the drama's fine if it makes a point. Guess what I'm trying to say is that humour is a really strong point for you. So please, please, put some more! And keep updating - personally I think it's great!Author's response
oh wow you read all the...how many chapters it is? 74? something like that? i don't remember...anyway, i appreciate the effort..as for the drama vs. comedy, I'm really trying to balance the two out...i mean, if it's just comedy, it gets annoying after a while and if it's just drama, you'd get sick of that too so I'm trying to put equal amount of both...but I'll take that to heart and see where i can't put more comedy. thanks for the feedback!
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