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• Stop. Rewind. Replay

  (#) Alyss 2007-09-30

  kwl!
  oooooo its a nu guy, hu is it??? miikkeeey?????
  i like it
  joannas coooooooooooool
  skl=crap
  woop wooop
  
  yeh tis v gd

  Author's response

  new guy...no, Joanna's the new girl...
  Well I can't tell you can I. Sheesh woman.
  So you like her better than leah?
  Well yes.
  
  Thanks. hugs

• Stop. Rewind. Replay

  (#) x_Charlie_x 2007-09-30

  aww im in love =)
  i really like the way you've written it. It's seamless... love it =)
  you're pretty damn talented

  Author's response

  In Love? looks around With who? Or what?
  Thanks.
  :] Thankyou for saying so!.

• Stop. Rewind. Replay

  (#) tragicWithACapital_T 2007-09-30

  haha, niiice
  i like this, very original
  but i think you shouldn't change up between first and third person quite so much. try doing it all in first, it seems suiting to the story
  =)

  Author's response

  Thanks.
  ok, I'll give it a go. Let it never be said don't listen to you guys.
  Although I may do two versions of chapter three. One all in first and one in first and third. :]

• Stop. Rewind. Replay

  (#) bindie611 2007-10-01

  I like it! I agree with 'tragic' that it is original, but also wanted to say that if you like, you should keep switching perspectives, you just might want to make sure you're specifying that you are doing, and whose point of view it's in. Otherwise, first person would be good. You write well.

  Author's response

  Okay, I'll bear that in mind with the pov's. Thanks for saying it's orginal and thanks for saying I write well.
  :]

• Stop. Rewind. Replay

  (#) clutsy_93 2007-10-01

  awww!
  amazing chapter, but her so called
  friend ditched her!
  lol, update soon and oh my god,
  is that guy she bumped into Mikey?
  winks
  
  lol update soon :)

  Author's response

  Yeah, friends, they're funny liek that. Always thinking you're ok when you're not.
  (And to the person I write letters to I know that you know how I'm feeling!)
  It could be Mikey. Could also be several other guys. Like Sam. And Phillip.
  I'll try.

• Stop. Rewind. Replay

  (#) Cerediwen 2007-10-02

  Love the whole crazy english girl thing. and the tripping over feet thing. so you know, I pretty much loved it XD

  Author's response

  Good.

• Stop. Rewind. Replay

  (#) Cerediwen 2007-10-02

  Love the whole crazy english girl thing. and the tripping over feet thing. so you know, I pretty much loved it XD

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