(#) i_heart_cliches 2007-10-02hahaha awesome!!!
I liked how you said "Scene Girl stirred, and stretched in a very girly way" when it was refering to Emo Boy. haha.
The whole thing was incredible. I love reading your story :D I can't wait to find out what happens! ;)
Author's responseI give credit for the mind-switching idea to Nancy and Jesika, who dressed up as Emo Boy and Scene Girl for their school's super hero day.
Anyways, I really don't want to have to switch their genders, so I'll be referring to them as their original genders, not their external genders. If that makes any sense at all.
Thank you so much for continuing to review even though I really never bug anyone to review. I really appreciate it that I get reviews because I'm loved, not because I'm annoying. But I would like some rates, too, so that even people with their filters on can see my story. ^_^
(#) GoogleGeek 2007-10-03I read the chapter title and immediatly thought of Pinocchio in Shrek. xD
"Emo Boy peeked down the front his shirt, and mouthed 'thank you!' at the ceiling, before taking yet another peek."
Just one more reason why Emo Boy was so awesome in the chapter
Author's responseHahahaha. Emo Boy IS a boy, after all... He may look slightly androgynous, but is still male.
I like pinnochio in shrek. He PWNS.End of story. But not mine. Because Scene Girl is gonna get REALLY sick of being a boy. And Emo Boy... well... he'll find out that being a girl isn't as easy as he thought that is was.
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