(#) MeganInWonderland 2007-11-04i liked it even tho thoes words i just typed make me two things 1 complete pervert and 2 hypocrit mabye on number two but tht goes to show u how much i liked your writting tho i hav but one sugjustion if u make this a series (up to u) try to make ryan and brendons reatinship mor thn sex but tht is if u make it a series IF
(#) FallsOuttaPlace 2008-03-13wow that was really good for a first! I don't even think i could do that good!----FallsOuttaPlace
Author's responseThank you so much. I always feel awkward reading sex scenes, but I feel this one turned out great.
Read the sequel, then you'll change your mind!
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