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• The Bulldog and the Archer

  (#) Teresa 2007-11-14

  Smiles......now that was lovely! It was wonderful how Charlie shared that with her! This story is great, many thanks for this new chapter!

• The Bulldog and the Archer

  (#) scruffy1 2007-11-15

  OH I like very much!!! A very inventive use of memories. And such memories, Rather than show a beautiful woman how beautiful he thought she was he showed her his life. Opening himself even more to her. Nice very nice.
  
  Congratulations this is a masterpiece in the making.
  
  Scruffy
  

  Author's response

  Thank you very much, Scruffy! I always enjoy trying to find new ways of using older ideas. I'm glad you liked the story. I hope to have some brand new chapters soon.
  
  --Jim

• The Bulldog and the Archer

  (#) elissandranne 2007-11-22

  Hi Jim! I'm not sure I already said so in a review... I think you're doing a very good job with your writing of the Dragon Preserve and the world of dragons inside the Potterverse. I do like the little world you have created here. A lot. :)
  
  As always, your descriptions are superb and give me the feeling that I can 'see' those places. And the cave with the spring seems an inviting place.
  
  You do love the Weasleys and it shows. You give even more depths to them all than JK Rowling did. I liked all the memories, and especially the one with Ginny. Oh, and why could Fawkes see May?
  
  It's a beautiful chapter, full of emotions. There is so much love and tenderness between Charlie and May. At the beginning, it was steamy, and then it made me go all "aww..." when he shared his memories with her.
  
  Good job!
  
  -Anne
  
  

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