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The crippling blow
3 reviewsJust when the heirs thought they'd be okay, Fiona pulls another dirty trick.
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The Silver Feather
(#) hunewearl 2007-11-20
OMg, i'm so sorry that no one's reviewed. I just found this story and tried to read through all the chapters in one go, but PLEASE Contnue!!!! I loved Chrys in your other story and am so glad u are writing more!!! know that u have support from me!!! ohh since u want some critiques, um, several sp mistakes but they don't distract from the story.The Silver Feather
(#) hunewearl 2007-11-20
OMG, i'm so sorry, i didn't notice that no reviewed and i just found this so i was gonna read it in one go. Well, i'm glad ur writing more stories, i loved chrys and this one's going good! as for some critiques, um little sp mistakes, but they don't distract from the story.Author's response
Thanks for the heads-up on the spelling errors, where are they? I would like to know so that I can go back and correct them, I'm going to read it over now and correct them.
Oh, and the next chapter should be up by the beginning of next week. I've been really busy lately, so I'll try to update quickly.The Silver Feather
(#) hunewearl 2007-11-20
oops, i thought there was something wrong...ummm sorry technical errors so now i posted 2 review, actually 3 now.
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