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I Wont Forget You
5 reviewsWhen Edmund is captured and imprisoned by the White Witch, he finds himself cast under the spell of the mysterious Phantasma.
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I Wont Forget You
(#) Elvenesse 2006-02-15
This was an interesting story! I noticed a few typos though - most noticeably in the story title. There are also inconsistencies in the use of contractions when Phantasma speaks.I Wont Forget You
(#) Enelya_Linde 2006-03-27
Yes, the inconsidfjhsdlkjd GAH! Cannot spell, can I? Inconsistencies... likely spelled wrong, but not the point. The ' ' 's in contractions are a bane to any fandom, and a drawback to any fic. I found your fic somewhat original, yes, if based upon Movie!Narnia, and the line was well-done. I enjoyed.I Wont Forget You
(#) Elliekin 2006-05-07
I admit when I started reading this I thought it was going to be a Mary-Sue, but you walked the line well between OC and 'Sue. :) This was a nice fic and quite sweet (and it helps that Edmund's my favourite character :P). The only problem with it, I think, was some missing punctuation, such as 's. Apart from that, well done!I Wont Forget You
(#) SayoriWakaba 2009-02-26
At first I was confused by the beginning, because it sonded like a Mary-Sue, but then it changed and it was very moving. I love how you captured Phantasma's innocence and portrayed it. I absolutely love any stories that have edmund in them ( and you ask why, PSHH ;D), and this one is definitely the best I've read so far. I love it ! Please keep writing!
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