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The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) pyrotechnicist 2007-12-04
first off: wonderful chapter
very descriptive and a joy to read
second: personally, if i were u, i wouldnt be worried one bit about stealing any ideas from eragon (even though you have made it plain that you havent)considering that the amount of plagiarism present in those books is catastrophic.
i was horrified when reading and watching the movies as to the amount of concepts and scenes i recognized from some of my favourite authors. as such i dont think you should worry at all
query though; as harry can become a dragon all by himself what use will he have of one of his own?
update soon
xoxoxAuthor's response
Thank you.
Fair point, but if I had written that chapter and not added the note at the end I would have had lots of people emailing me saying, is this a 3 way crossover, you stole that from eragon and various other complaints, plus the fact that I was very proud of the idea when I first came up with it and although I love the eragon stories it annoyed me that my idea looked like a rip off of another authors work.
Yes Harry can become a dragon but 2 things I will point out are, 1. he is a Chinese dragon which is (by dragon standards) very small, barely 30 feet (I think thats what I decided on) in length and not even five foot wide, he is more like a snake with legs.
Secondly, not everyone knows he can become a dragon and having Harry Potter on the battlefield is much easier to write than Harry Potter as a dragon. Having an actual dragon on the battlefield is easier to write about in the third person.
I hope that answers your question.
Keep reading and reviewing
GuardianOfLightThe Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) thedon1023 2007-12-04
should we be worried about Ginny and that charmed neclace? shes pullin a Molly Weasley with love potion/charm thats on that neclace though i wonder why Harry or Adam havent noticed it.
-The DonAuthor's response
Molly Weasley and the love potions? You've lost me there.
I can't tell you about the necklace just yet, it would give away the surprise.
Harry probably should have noticed but despite everything he is not perfect and Adam has no reason to be suspicious.
Keep reading and reviewing
GuardianOflightThe Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-12-09
The Eragon explanation? Who cares. You are aware that you are writing fan fiction, and a cross-over bit at that, yeah? :) Sorry my bit for Gordon Ramsey. When he's not dropping the F bomb it's yeah at the end of angry or frustrated sentences. Good show on this chapter. Makes me wonder about the phoenix necklace and possibly some hidden form of betrayal? Just thinking aloud, mind.
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(#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-01-16
Very good chapter to a great story.
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(#) TurtleBlue 2009-04-29
Like the fic & happy u r updating!
How can stalker!gin-gin & those twin bro's keep looking at themselves in the mirror with no guilt after all that HP/FD have done/given to them? Waiting W/bated breath for some WWW fireworks when this comes to a head! (am reading as fast as I can!)
(sign) - Will take off 1/2 star off ratings due to 'emione ONLY choice for everLasting luv on this entire planet is Git!Ron!!!!!! (argh!!! - it's my hangup -one of many - of the canon story - don't bug about it)
Turtleblue
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