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Crashing Hearts
(#) girlinthemoon 2007-12-10
I laughed loudly at the Patrick giggling so gaily. Funny, very funny. (glad I’m home alone.)
I’m kind of glad she’s not knocked up. It would have been good, but I think you can do more with it this way.
Wonderful update as always. And thanks for brightening my day with this little gem.
Author's response
I nearly died myself after writing that part. I paused to imagine the scene and when it happened I lost it lol. I have two chapters for this story I'm working on and hopefully they'll both be posted soon and hopefully you'll like those two as well ^^. Have a good day at work if you go in today!Crashing Hearts
(#) redballoon 2007-12-10
oh man. i really really wanted Casey to be pregnant too. that would have been amazing, especially since you've made Pete out to be such a sensitive and caring guy.
I'd have to agree with girlinthemoon. i can 100% picture Patrick's little giggle, and then embarrasment. it made me smile. more so when Joe had to go chase him out and be the caring, please-forgive-me boyfriend.
please update soon!
-ally-Author's response
lol I decided it was time for another cute Joe/Trick moment that would make everyone laugh or say aw a lot hehe. Thanks for your review and keep an eye out for two new chapters coming soon ^^.Crashing Hearts
(#) GoogleGeek 2007-12-10
Awwh, the last line made me smile.
Well, actually the whole chapter kind of did.
Awesome, as always.Author's response
glee I love making my readers smile. And I love hearing that I did so ^^. I have a couple of chapters I'm working on and hopefully they'll be posted soon, maybe one today, who knows? lol But I hope you like them.Crashing Hearts
(#) Lacon84 2007-12-11
awesome installment. I really enjoy your writing style, and I like the good drama element you incorporate along with the humor you add. I feel bad for Pete now, but I love what the last line implies about his personality and character. I can't wait to see what happens next. :)Author's response
Hehe, of course you can't wait to see what happens next my dear, you ARE my muse after all ^^. But thank you for the writing style compliment ^^.
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