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While Love's On The Line
(#) ReadymadeGirl 2007-12-27
just... wow!
youre a fabolous writer!
and the story line is really good
i want to read more right now :]Author's response
Aw, thanks. And for my first fan fiction too...haha, thank you so much.While Love's On The Line
(#) EvolHexx 2007-12-27
“Frank, why are you holding my underwear?!” Gerard’s voice suddenly asked.
LMFAOO!!
XD!
This is the best friken story!
ZOMMG, UPDATE SOON!
Andd ggrr! I hate Frankie's gf.. that whore!
Weelll anywaayyss
xD.
Awesome story!
Please update soon!
x]While Love's On The Line
(#) Jamie-core 2007-12-27
Swicked Story.
Amzingly talented writer you are indeed.
Update soon please.
[x]Author's response
I'll try to...soon...While Love's On The Line
(#) crystalcrash 2007-12-27
Updates make me happier than they should =)
Nice chapter. About the rating... you should change it depending on what will happen in future chapters. If it gets a little too hot (if it's even possible for a Frerard to get "too" hot lol), than change it to R.
Frank's girlfriend is a bitch, i wouldn't have been able to control myself like Gee did.
Anyways, nice writing. Very cute story. Can't wait for the bitch to be out of it xD
Update soon and we'll all love you more
xoxoWhile Love's On The Line
(#) xXHeavenHelpUsXx 2007-12-27
Whoa. I flippin love this story. Its great!! And so cute. Urf. Wilona that fucking whore!! Psh bitch. Anywho. Updates!!!While Love's On The Line
(#) GerardWayisSex 2007-12-28
This story is so cute. I can't wait for an update! I have it on alerts. :P
~FinchAuthor's response
Awesome! I'm so totally honored.
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