(#) TangerineSky 2007-12-27Woo Hoo! An update on My birthday about someone else's shitty birthday! It makes me feel better to know that mine won't be as shitty as Zaydee's was.
I can't wait for more!!!!!!!
Author's responseLol, Glad I can make you Day better!
(#) redballoon 2007-12-27wow. first off, your updates are amazing because they are so long! :D
second, wow. that was not a fun birthday. although i am curious as to why david reminds her of patrick, unless its just that she likes him so much. Patrick better get his damn head out of the clouds and realize how badly he's screwing up! cause i really think that they could work....
well, maybe not anymore with all the shit he's been doing... :(
amazing update, though!
Author's responseThank you, I try!
As for those awesome questions of yours...I can't answer them. lol.
you'll just have to keep reading.. xD
that was just terrible!!! there is no other word for it!!!! (i mean what trick did, not your writing!!!!!- eek)
i swear my jaw dropped in shock!!! i mean, i know he was being an ass, but in HER BED?!?!! come on!!!!!
great update!! cant wait for the next!!
I love how everyone has this "PatrickisPerfectHeCanDoNoHarm" thing going lol.
I love Patrick to death, but everyone is human and everyone is capable of making mistakes.
Thats one thing I really wanted to Convey with this story.
(#) pyrotechnicist 2007-12-27haha awesome chapter
that was soo mean i cant believe it!
they were getting to it on her bed!
ON HER BED!
thats just low - like holy shit i just dropped my keys in the sewer low.
yes he can make mistakes like neone but that's not a mistake - lol - thats just mean
great chapter update soon
Author's responseHehe, Gracias!
On. Her. Bed.
In Patrick's defense, Cindee dragged him in there, lol. I just forgot to put that in the chapter!
(#) falloutgirl 2007-12-28This just made my jaw drop.
Patrick wouldn't be such a bitch, would he? Ugh. Stupid Cindee.
And on her birthday... Damn.
Update soon! I've been following this story for a while now. =)
Author's responseLol, he wouldn't be. Unless Cindee was the puppet master!
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