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k the first chapter was just bones so heres some more. please review and tell me what you think
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Seasons Change but People Don't
(#) miss_pretty 2008-01-04
u mean ash like in ashlee simpson?? i hope not! urgh
anyways, i like this story, keep going!
Author's response
what ashlee simpson?! Fuck no!! eww. I think I just pucked in my mouth.
No I meant Ash as in me :P cause thats my name. But everything else is pretty much fake. Glade you like it!
I'll post some more tonight or tomorrow hopefully :)
Thnkax for taking the time to review!Seasons Change but People Don't
(#) rejected_smurf_god 2008-01-05
I like this story too! It's very good, but I think some ways that you could improve it is to maybe have a little bit of feeling, like a paragraph where he's not talking he's telling the reader what he feels.
Other than that, it's great!Author's response
Yes I completely agree with you. I knew something was missing. But wasn't really sure how to go about it. But yeah more of Pete no exactly nataring will come up :)
Thanks for reviewing and telling me how to improve! It means alot :)
Hows the writters block going?Seasons Change but People Don't
(#) rejected_smurf_god 2008-01-06
I'm just telling you now. Writer's Block sucks.Author's response
hahah yeah I bet. Lets hope it doesn't happen to me soon :s knocks on wood
Listen to a bunch of music. That always helps me :)Seasons Change but People Don't
(#) rejected_smurf_god 2008-01-07
Yeah, that does seem to help doesn't it?
I don't think you'll have any trouble. You've got yourself a good storyline.
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