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While Love's On The Line
(#) Nothingtosay 2008-01-05
Noooo damn waiter!!!! >:|. This story is so brilliant. Please add a new chap soon ur amazing XDWhile Love's On The Line
(#) Vampiress 2008-01-05
noo NO! Damn you mister waiter guy!
more more more please?While Love's On The Line
(#) crystalcrash 2008-01-05
I think it's kind of dumb that Gee wouldn't tell Frankie about Mr Hot just bc the bitch was going to tell Frankie about Gee being gay. So? It's better than knowing that Frankie is with a cheating whore.
Why did Frankie suddenly change idea and almost kiss Gee? In every other chapter he was all shy and wierded out whenever Gee got close to him.
Damn waiter! Lol. When they finally kiss i'll be able to breath easy xD
Cute chapter even though i hate that girl more every day.
More?Author's response
Damn it, there's so much stuff I screwed up on...I realize that now that you pointed it out. Ahhh...I guess I'll have to clear things up in the next chapter. Or maybe I'll rewrite this chapter, just the ending.While Love's On The Line
(#) crystalcrash 2008-01-06
You didn't screw it up at all, i love your story! I just thought that Gee was dumb for thinking like that hehe.
The ending is fantastic now, really. Can't wait for the next chapter!! xD
♥While Love's On The Line
(#) crystalcrash 2008-01-06
Aww, i didn't mean to say that you screwed anything up, I love your story! I just thought that Gee was dumb for thinking the way he did! hehe.
I must admit that i like the ending more now, its fantastic =)
Can't wait for more
♥Author's response
lol, that's okay, I didn't get offended or anything. Your reviews are REALLY helpful, so seriously thanks so much.
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