Harry Potter was taken in by an ancient power and raised knowing his true heritage. To everyone else, Harry has been dead for fifteen years. What happens when the light needs help the most? Complete!
Nice story. A bit far out with Merlin still alive but hey its your story. Nice work.
I liked it. The battle scene was descriptive without being overly bloody, except what happened to the poor baslisk? You left many unanswered question in you AU, like was Snape good or bad, what powers did Harry have? Why couldn't Merlin leave the cave? What did Harry do afterwards? Though a short story has many good points, it leaves just as many unanswered questioned. How about a sequel.
that's it? seems rather abrupt. it leaves a lot of questions unanswered. how about developing it into a longer story? good fic just too short!
That waa a good story. What about the Horcruxes, though?
Gonna be a sequel? I liked apart from it being short.
(#) Apol 2010-03-14
i doubt this will do any good but please please PLEASE write a sequel
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