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A Crisis Approaches
18 reviewsHarry realizes Ginny is in trouble, and then learns exactly how much.
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When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-01-12
Very good, and like how we get to see the Riddle diary mindset, as well as Ginny's own torments from her jealousy of H/Hr, and to see how things are progressing here. Going to be interesting to see how things work out in the Chamber this time, as well as to how things go afterwards. Also good to see Snape get spanked some here, and Pansy, almost feel sorry for her...almost.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) pfeil 2008-01-12
"In addition, besides of course befriending the Weasley girl, Tom had managed to get the story of how 'He-Who-Must-Be-Named' (how he enjoyed the fact that the girl did not even dare write Voldemort!) had been defeated."
I think Mr-I-Love-Hyphens is missing a -Not-.
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Bugger. Thanks, it's fixedWhen Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) pstibbons 2008-01-12
A good chapter. Glad Harry's capable of making mistakes.
Any chance of posting this on ffnet or Portkey?When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) rtc5873 2008-01-12
The most original stories about Harry Potter I have read. Thank you for this unique story.
Sincerely
JohnWhen Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) PerfesserN 2008-01-12
Arrrrgh! Cliffie!
And since this time stream has been altered we can't assume anything, can we?
You are evil, T.
I approve, of course.
N!When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) MrPowell 2008-01-12
well then hopefully Harry will be able to get her out of trouble.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) Elfwyn 2008-01-12
Fantastic plot. Love the Brotherhood OCs, Snape and Dumbledore being de-fanged and Malfoy being blinded. Sirius is an ass that needs manners pounded into him. There is the occasional mistyped word, usually two put together, but other than that it is a riveting story showcasing the foibles and bigotry of the wizarding world and the mistakes even the immortals can make. Can't wait to see what happens in the Chamber and beyond. Will Harry choose to be an immortal leaving the wizarding world behind?Author's response
I'm not sure how the run-togther words happen, as some occur when I translate the chapter to html, and then even more creep in when I up-load to ficwad.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) truester 2008-01-12
Thank you for a very well written story. I can't wait for more to be done.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) Wolfric 2008-01-12
I continue to enjoy your story. I am awaiting further installments with considerable anticipation. Thank you for writing. I have trouble getting this website to accept reviews so we'll see if this one makes it. W.
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