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• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) banner 2008-01-17

  Wow. That was close! Good rescue. I'm having so much fun with this story - it's so lighthearted.

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  (#) MrPowell 2008-01-17

  and Blaise was unconcious the entire time. Pity, that could have caused a lot of fun. Will we be seeing more Weasleys?

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  (#) minerdude 2008-01-17

  I loved the nod to the deathly hallows. and explaining the boy/girl of Blaise

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  (#) Cateagle 2008-01-17

  Nice, loads of fun there; and lots of laughs, too. I loved the encounter with the Weaseleys, I wonder how much Dumbles had promised them? The close rescue was a very nice touch and I appreciated the understanding 'tween Boss Zambini and Boss Barone, I'll be looking forward to seeing what comes of that. -wicked chuckle- I can just see, if Hermione was cool with it, a thresome marriage of Harry, Hermione, and Blaise as a way to settle the conflicts between the two families. Heh, it's been done between royal families for a good while.

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  (#) irishfighter 2008-01-18

  Awesome chapter, can't wait to see the next one.

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  (#) Innortal 2008-01-18

  Enjoyable, especially the Hallow reference. I also am left wondering what was with his reaction to seeing Ginny and Ron, and if they might get the same second chance Draco did.
  
  Somehow, I wonder if Remus will be upset that he doesn't have an action figure.

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  (#) Teresa 2008-01-18

  Chuckle...now that was fun to read! I loved seeing certain people get what they deserved...ie Crouch Sn., Gillingworth Esq the idiot, and Evelyn. I also loved seeing Molly get told off by Harry. It's a pity that Adeline didn't end up taking that potion during the scuffle with Harry. That could have solved a few problems for Boss Zabini, then again, maybe not. Hmmm...will Boss Zabini suggest an allince to Boss Barone via marriage? Many thanks for the chapter!

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  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-01-18

  Gotta love Boss Zabini. The man is just hilarious.
  
  Looking forward to more.

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  (#) Cateagle 2008-01-18

  You've got a most interesting chapter, there. I, too, liked the nod to the Deathly Hallows as well as the mayhem that the trial and its ending caused the Ministry. The scenes with the Weasleys were fun, esp. in the store where we got to see a lot more of the motivation of Ron and Ginny (if they only knew!! - which makes it all the more fun). I feel they're likely to be sadly disappointed by the time Harry does get to Hogwarts.
  
  The bits with Boss Zambini were a delight and I loved the "rescue" of Blaise. I do have to wonder if this might strengthen ties between Harry, Hermione, and Blaise (that could get interesting, later) and perhaps a merger of the two Families.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Nessann 2008-01-24

  Excellent chapter, cannot wait to read more, i like that Harry save another friend. Great job!

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