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We can settle this affair.
(#) _cranium_ 2008-02-15
well it's just that i like to know things. but then again, if you wrote down the story of her life, i wouldn't like that. this is just me being impatient. however, i like your style and i wouldn't have it any other way. that's what keeps me addicted. and i think that's what keeps the other readers addicted too.
viola is kind of a narrator in this story and it would be rather odd to have her think about herself that much. i don't know how to explain it but uhm.. let's put it like this: if you did tell us every detail even remotely related to viola, it would seem like she was mentally writing an autobiography. and that's not a good thing. it greta that we learn new things about her, aswell as the other characters, within every new chapter.
like i said, i'm just being impatient.
that, and the fact that jacob likes to complain.Author's response
Oh I get it now, I just freaked cause I took it as...um like I dunno like I wasn't doing a good job introducing the charechters but now I get it.We can settle this affair.
(#) _cranium_ 2008-02-15
i hope i made it a bit more clear..? i don't want you to feel like you should give us all the details right away cause i believe that some of us might lose the interest if you did..Author's response
Oh I totally do! Thanks for taking the time and clearing it up for me!We can settle this affair.
(#) _cranium_ 2008-02-16
wtf i wrote a fucking paragraph explaining my first review and dammit, it didn't show up.
to make it short, i stated that this was only me being impatient. i love your style and wouldn't have it any other way. jacob just likes complaining when he doesn't know what will happen.
oh and it would be just my luck if the paragraph i wrote earlier magically showed up after i posted this one..Author's response
I saw your explanation and actually responded, didn't it show up? meh fuck ficwad!
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