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Domination
(#) Wolfric 2008-02-25
I am enjoying your story. I don't care which girls you include as long as there is some variety. Thanks for writing. W.Domination
(#) Kitsune-Taishou 2008-02-26
You thinkin about adding Gabrielle and Fleur, perhaps Narcissa.Domination
(#) minerdude 2008-02-26
May I suggest Moine as a Dom with Pansy and Lavendar as her Subs and a relationship with Harry as friends with benifits, maybe Harry and his male subs can sire Moine and her sub's childrenDomination
(#) CrimsonRogue 2008-02-26
I actually had a question while thinking about this fic while I was at work. What's Dumbledore's Nature?
Then I had an epiphany as to why he did what he did. Dumbledore's not a dominant, but a sub. His dominant was Grindlewald and Dumbles bound his own nature in order to be able to defeat his dom.
So he figured that Harry would be alright if similarly bound, as Dumbledore is moderately alright (except he's not and just needs someone to slap down his more manipulative tendencies).Author's response
Interesting premise - my idea for Dumbles' Nature was similar, that he was a Sub who repressed his Nature because he felt the concept of NAtures to be demeaning/bad etc. If I use your idea with Grindlewald, Ill credit youDomination
(#) lycus 2008-02-26
Well this story, has some good stuff. and as far as the girls go. of course daphne greengrass would be harrys' way into dealing with the purebloods the patil twins would open up overseas connections along with su li. Gabrielle would open the same channels along with the support of magical beings. and I know that you said that hermione might not fit in with what you wanteed to do, but even if she was a dom she might have had enough trauma to turn her into a bit of a sub not a complete sub but enough for her to put her trust in harry to make decisions for her. so she doesn't have the pressure of being a dom stressing her so much.Domination
(#) lycus 2008-02-26
Damn I forgot to say that, harry might need these girls with him if dumbles and or the ministry might become a problem. of if a leftover deatheater tries to kill harry. and he will need hermiones brains for that and body too.Author's response
Im wavering on Hermione...Patils definitely, Daphne definitely, Su Li is an intriguing possibility as she has almost no personality in the books which means I can make her up however I wantDomination
(#) drifter 2008-02-26
You said that there were levels of dominants. Dominents have to have some kind of competition. Wonder if they might co-tow to higher dominant like your higher/lower sub's?.
Hermione in the canon was introduced as a intelligent bookworm who retreated into herself because of criticism. Even you have shown her having a fantasy of being taken in a library, so you must see her a some kind of sub, possibly a higher one, kind of like a head maid. The head maid controls the running of the females of the house under the master or the master's wife.
Most of your school female's are the same school year level as Harry, cepting Ginny and Tonks. What of the upper and lower levels? There is mention of many girls in Hogworts are thinking, considering (crushing) about Harry. How many others has Harry bound without knowing about it. Uh .... out of school and/or in the war, TOO?
It might be interesting to see the female teachers (ie. McGonigal) reacting later in age because on suppressed natures, nother way to take some of the control from Dumblydore.
(Snicker) Don't forget Reta, the reporter bug. Reporters are full of issues and it might be a good way to have "some" control of the press.
Wonder how magical creature (besides Vela) will react to Harry. (grin)
That gives me an opening to bring up Molly's reaction. Oh, boy the ministries and the wizingamont also. Eeeeek!, THE QUEEN, and mundane ministry etc. too!
Is this a enough ideas for now?
Anyway, thanks for a good and fun read. Most definitely want to see where you go with this.
May the MUSE be with you!!!Author's response
I wanted to make a point of limiting the girls to around Harry's age. So no McGonagall, no Rita, no Molly.
Girls like Katie Bell are fun, Angelina and Alicia too. Theres a reason I either killed off or sent away the majority of the main male character :-)Domination
(#) LordSeagen 2008-02-27
I really love your story so far. The only problem I have with it is that in Chapter One Paragragh 10 you mention that Tonks is the sole surviour of the Black family. Something about them dieing early in the war. Then at the end of chapter Two you have them in Gringotts with Dumbledorf. Please continue to write this fabulous story. Lord Seagen
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