- Thank you.
This is a very interesting story, and i'm even more intrigued now, knowing a part of the Fumbledore Master Plan. Why doesn't anyone ever make an apprentice plan? Nevermind. Your Luna is incredibly loveable, and her father is a great character.
More power to your keyboard!
- great work, and nice to see a little development with harry and luna... the snortwart things were great... though a description would be nice...
i thought this was a harry/luna and possibily susan story??? though i don't really mind daphne...
is mcGonagall going to interfere with dumbles plans? she better, it knowledge comes power, and with power responsibility.
and i can't wait to see harry lose it regarding others choosing his wife?
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-02-26Nice moment with Mr. Lovegood and Harry here, that was an interesting chat they had, and it's good to see Harry actually getting a bit of a Father figure in his life. After that, the talk with Luna was well done, and I really enjoyed the way that Harry was able to take her off guard a bit. Dumbledore, the man is just about as mean and nasty as can be imo, and honestly wish that Minerva would slap the living ** out of him. I do hope that his plans backfire on him badly, though it's nice of Minerva to think that Harry likes Hermione. Can't wait for the next part.
(#) Clell65619 2008-02-27- Loved the conversation with the elder Lovegood. A very pointed bird and the bees.
- "Daddy wouldn't chop you up" Perfect. It was nice to see someone disconcert Luna, just this once. And Harry got to see a snorkack.
- Please tell me you plan on having Dumbles beaten to death? Please?
(#) iamspammer 2008-02-27- I was quite sure that even if they were wizards, they'd have contraceptive potions and charms. I mean, why not take this and even if something goes beyond the line, say, they'll be protected?
- I do want to see how Harry plans to thawrt all Dumble's plans.
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