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• 100 MCR oneshota

  (#) rocky_horror 2008-02-29

  you are a pretty good writer and you kept my attention. i have to say i think mikey especially would get passed gerard and frankie. u make the guys sound like close-minded jerks. love is love they would know that. but if that is how u want to write its cool but its till kind of upsets me. i like the last line a lot i can relate. :)
  

• 100 MCR oneshota

  (#) broken_wings 2008-02-29

  you have talent as a writer. its very...philosophical almost. well not really, but its in that same sense, that same sort of genre. its thought provoking.

• 100 MCR oneshota

  (#) kitkatpwl 2008-03-01

  that was really upsetting. well written but yea. i really didnt like that mikey and the rest of the band didnt like gee and frankies relationship. i think in real life they'd be cool with it. i cant see them using the word "unnatural".
  so...even though that kinda sounded like i was saying i didnt like the story, its not true. i actually really liked the story; you write really well and it was interesting to read a different view point for a frerard. good job! :)
  cheers
  kat

• 100 MCR oneshota

  (#) x_Charlie_x 2008-03-03

  I really liked this, screw if it isn't how they would react in real life. In real life Gerard's married and Frank is soon to be married. This isn't real, it's fan fiction, and I absolutely love it Charli =)
  I really like that it was short and blunt and to the point and that last line just knocked the breath right out of me.
  It's made me go all thoughtful... instead of bouncing off the walls because of a certain text I recieved last night XD
  anyway... essay over. That was amazing. I can't wait to see how the other 99 turn out! You're really progressing as a writer and it's good to see you try different styles. I like it =D

• 100 MCR oneshota

  (#) frankiiee 2008-03-16

  that's horrible!
  well no!
  like horrible as in thats soo sad!
  this was really good =D

  Author's response

  thanks, that was the response i was kinda aiming for. thanks for reviewing!
  
  x c x

• 100 MCR oneshota

  (#) linerlover 2008-05-06

  this is a really good first-time try, and you have a very good writing style...
  really sad though.
  but reeeeaaally good at the same time.

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