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We can settle this affair.
(#) alice93 2008-03-07
Ewww, gross!
WOW! good chapter!
She really is very devious!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
AliceAuthor's response
muhahahahahahhahaWe can settle this affair.
(#) cutegirl12356 2008-03-07
They need to start showing the love...lol! Where is the love...haha! Great chapter...Can't wait for more!Author's response
but they don't like each other much..We can settle this affair.
(#) kitkatpwl 2008-03-08
aawww im with cutegirl12356!!!! where is the love!?!?
they are so destructive! hahaha
loved the chapter! great job! i wish gee would be nicer to her tho...i wish she'd stop being so self-destructive!
cant wait for the next one!!
cheers
katAuthor's response
Yeah they both suck lol.We can settle this affair.
(#) _cranium_ 2008-03-09
this was awesome. every single chapter seems to be better than the last one. it's like you just can't stop improving *frowns*
jacob's so jealous.Author's response
Serj's head just got this shows how much big.We can settle this affair.
(#) hopeanne 2008-03-24
Oh man. I owe you a bunch of reviews so Im doing it here cause its easier to see which goes to which chapter.
This scene came off brilliantly. I loved it. You captured it all really well, her taunting him and then choking and all the emotions that go with it. I mean she is 15. I love how you keep her so realistic like that. Its so easy to make your charac.s or atleast want to make your characs sorta heroic or smart all the time or right all the time but you keep her so real. She makes a lot of mistakes and the best part is she never seems to learn from them. lol.
Story plot wise. I do think she needs to 'fall' a bit more before reaching rock bottom, mostly cause she doesnt even see herself as spiraling downwards yet. And gee. Oh gee. He is a typical teenaged boy. Give them the choice of common sense or getting some and see what happens.
lol
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