- Somewhat of a different approach to things, there, and fairly original. It bids to be an interesting story. Unfortunately, it's originality is let down by readability difficults; you really need a good beta for your stories. You've got some original ideas and the basic plotting looks at least adequate, but mispellings and wrong word usage detracts from that.
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- I haven't read this, but am very interested in how I managed to get into the Harry Potter world without my knowledge.
I case you're wondering, this is the ORIGINAL Gripfang Wildeblade.
I'm the guy who pops up all over when you do a google search on the name.
I've had the name for 7 or 8 years now.
I'll read your story and if I like it, good on ye.
If I don't, you'll quite possibly be harassed mercilessly.
Peas and cookies!
Author's responseGripfang does creep up in a lot of stories doesn't it.
And thank you for reading my story. I do hope you like it.
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