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Abruptly as he had pressed forward, Ryan pulled back, and his eyes darted around everywhere except Brendon's eyes. He couldn't look, because what kind of expression would Brendon be wearing? Surely...
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Cracked nails & Red lollipops
(#) jeriactress 2008-03-08
please update soon. i really like it!
Author's response
Thanks!
I'm working on the next chapter right now!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
KendraCracked nails & Red lollipops
(#) Disenchanted 2008-03-08
Oh my god. Poor Ryan!
This was an amazing chapter.
Spencer sounds so sweet =D
And another cliffhanger! What's Bden gonna say?Author's response
Thank you so much!
And to me, Spence just seems like he'd be a sweetheart XD
You'll have to wait and see~!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
KendraCracked nails & Red lollipops
(#) BeautifulxDisaster 2008-03-08
awww i really liked this chapter :)
especially because of how motherly Spencer was being lol.
i can't wait for more!Author's response
Thank you~!
Yes, I just thought that was probably how Spencer would act if something like that happened to Ryan :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
KendraCracked nails & Red lollipops
(#) RyanRossLuver 2008-03-08
Aww, this cahpter was so cute - in the Ryan going to Specer perspective. And the last line has got me thinking!
Update soon so I hear Brendon's speech!
xox EmmiAuthor's response
Thank you!
I'm working on the next chapter right now~!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
KendraCracked nails & Red lollipops
(#) pyrotechnicist 2008-03-08
omg
i cant seriosluy believe you got through
one thousand, four hundred, and thirty-one words without resolving this!!!!
i cant take the suspense
I NEED more now!!!!!!!
please
im begging on my knees.
please! with a cherry on top? -hopeful look- lol
it was a great chap
xAuthor's response
Wow, me neither actually! I didn't even check the word count!
Lol, I'll update sooner this time, don't worry!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
KendraCracked nails & Red lollipops
(#) Sebastien_Is_Hott_ 2008-03-09
I agree with pyrotechnicist! How the heck can you use all those words to make a perfectly good story have a heart-wrenching cliffhanger! Couldn't you have used maybe a few more words to resolve it!?! I could lend you a few! Update soon before I have to open a can of.........OF..........BEGGING!!! I'm BEGGING you!!! Update please!!! I gotta hear what he has to say... I'm not gonna say Brendon, b/c I'm not for sure it IS B-den. Anywho, UPDATE now missy! lotz of luv, HannahAuthor's response
LOL! Oh gosh, well what can I say? I tend to always need to put an overly outdrawn and angsty spin on things. Even if this was originally only supposed to be a crack! fic, now it's more serious.
Don't worry, the next chapter will have everything expained hopefully
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
KendraCracked nails & Red lollipops
(#) xxpatdxx 2008-03-09
OMFG update now or evil leprichauns will come and stal you in the night. srsly.
This is amazing. Spencer is definately awesome and Brendon is like....wow.
lol I love the homophobe speech dude
LOVELOVELOVE
UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEAuthor's response
Lol, leprichauns now?
Thanks! I hope I made them seem realistic enough! And that speech, haha, thank youu.Cracked nails & Red lollipops
(#) medicatedlives 2008-03-09
CLIFFHANGER GAHHHHHHHH!!!!!
I absolutely adore this fic, plleaseeee continue!Author's response
Thank you! And I will, as soon as I can.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
KendraCracked nails & Red lollipops
(#) __Strawberry 2008-03-13
OMG you and your CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!
I love this story SO MUCH!!!!!!!
pleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease update soon!!!!!!!
I LOVE IT SOOOO MUCH
I NEED MORE I NEED MORE I NEED MORE!!!Author's response
Lol, I'm glad you like it so much!
You might just be my fic's biggest fan~!
I'll update as soon as I can.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
KendraCracked nails & Red lollipops
(#) heartcandii_x 2008-03-19
Oh my dear. I do believe I have become literally addicted to your story.
I read this last night, and you kept me hanging right on my seat. I almost screamed/cried in desperation when I went to click the 'next chapter' button, and it wasn't there. Alas, that is when you realise, you have written a bloody brilliant story.
Your technique is very well-developed, and as a critic/beta reader, I found it hard to find any mistakes whatsoever. Your unique way with descriptions is very appealing to the reader, which is essential (and I can tell from the reviews that you have succeeded in such area), and your characters are also appealing, and I find them rather enjoyable.
Alas, my short critique is done, and therefore, you should update as soon as possible. You have me wrapped around your finger (bloody American girl, you), and I shall be checking everyday for an update. So, toodle along and finish the next chapter! :]
xoxo, orieAuthor's response
Oh! blushesblushesblushes
Thank you so much! You have no idea how much reviews like that make me smile. I was almost worried that I had wrote a rather boring story, so I'm surprised at how many people are actually liking this story!
Not to mention, I was wondering if I'd made any mistakes, so don't hesitate and tell me if I do. (my beta still hasn't gotten back to me for the prologue ;~;, so it might have errors)
The next chapter should be up in a couple of days, I'm almost finished!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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