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We can settle this affair.
(#) _cranium_ 2008-03-09
that was raw.
it's a good thing though, it's so different. most fics you read are romantic and peachy and full of clichés, it's nice to read something less pretty every now and then.
she's like what, 15 now? "that girl's not right in the head"... who said that? is that from a song or what? soryr it really doesn't have much to do with the chapter, except that it sounds like it was written about viola but i just had sort of a blackout and i can't remember where that line came from...
ok anywaayys... wouldn't it be just ironic if everything was a huge misunderstanding.. i mean yeah it's very obvious that donald and her mom are fucking but if it was just a misunderstanding, viola couldn't do what she's doing in the name of revenge.. and after all this, she'd be the dirty slut, not her mom.
that's the shit jacob likes. ironic and bittersweet..Author's response
I like that too, I hate fluffy stories mainly cause it leaves me with this bitter taste like HA! this shit would never happen in real life.
That line by the way is from hang 'em high from the revenge album but I'm sure you figured it out by now.We can settle this affair.
(#) alice93 2008-03-09
That was so fucking sweet at the end. What was that thing with Arthur and Lee about her looking younger being better, isn't that a bit sick?
I really feel like I understand her character, where she's coming from and why she's such a bitch to people, especially Gerard.
This was such a great chapter, I love the fact it wasn't too slushy but it was still romantic towards the end. I really like Gerard and Viola's realtionship.
AliceAuthor's response
you love their relationship? I think you're the first.We can settle this affair.
(#) kitkatpwl 2008-03-09
one of my favorite chapters so far!! its so sad how messed up she is but I LOVE how sweet gee was being!! thwy need to get together for real! its so obvious that he's in love with her! update soon!Author's response
I like to throw in shit that balances the emotion in the chapter so I'm glad you enjoyed it!We can settle this affair.
(#) cutegirl12356 2008-03-09
Theirs the love gee had...finally showing some love...my favoite chapter so far...can't wait to see of what's to come!Author's response
I knew you'd be happy!We can settle this affair.
(#) bess 2008-03-12
sorry for the doubple post i thought it f*cked up so i wrote it againAuthor's response
Aw don't worry about it, I'm just glad you enjoyed it that much!We can settle this affair.
(#) hopeanne 2008-03-24
Okay I personally wouldve liked to have seen a bit more of the sex scene with her and the two men but you wrote it well. The fact that she was so wasted made it okay that you didnt detail it too much. I just think that there was a huge opportunity there for her to be mmm humiliated thats all. But she didnt see it as such, i mean she sorta did, thats where the guilt and the nausea came in. \
again this chap was really well balanced. And I think Gerards charac is coming along nicely as well.
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