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• This Was No Accident.

  (#) emovampire 2008-05-10

  i'm crying i'm crying i'm crying i'm crying i'm crying and it's really hard to type when your crying and crying and crying and crying.......
  noooooooooooooooooooo don't die!!!!
  YOU LOVE ONE ANOTHER SO JUST BE AS YOU ARE DON'T DIE!!!!!aggghhh!!!
  ...you are a powerful writer...
  beautiful....

  Author's response

  Oh no! Don't cry!
  It's all fiction. :]
  
  Thank you for reviewing, even if you did cry while doing so. :]
  
  Powerful writer, eh?
  Nobody has ever said that to me, before. I think I like that title. :]

• This Was No Accident.

  (#) falloutgirl 2008-06-02

  Are you serious?
  
  This is too good to be real. In fact, good is such a understatement. It's brilliant, it's fantabulous, it's- it's, Oh good Lord, I've run out of words.
  
  The build-up was executed so well, it was ridiculous. The thoughts running through Brendon's head were so realistic, it was scary. It was like you put yourself through that situation and then wrote everything down. THAT'S how clear cut and picture perfect that was.
  
  There were a few parts some people might call cliche, but you carried them off really well and produced one fucking amazing story.
  
  This is why I love you.
  You are my new internet best friend. No, you cannot argue on that fact.
  
  Savvy?

  Author's response

  Thank you oh-so very much.
  
  I'm glad you enjoyed it. When I posted this, I thought it wasn't very good, but by the amount of feedback I received from this, I was mistaken.
  
  I'm also glad that I carried off cliche parts in my story well.
  
  INTERNET BEST FRIENDS TO THE CORE!
  
  :]]]

• This Was No Accident.

  (#) darkearthmagic 2008-06-17

  oh...wow. That was amazing! I love how you totally got the sepence going. I really thought for a moment, maybe Brendon wouldn't jump...But I love the very last sentence. That totally topped off the story. :) Good work, I'm adding this 2 my fav.s

  Author's response

  Thank you.

• This Was No Accident.

  (#) IeroMyHero 2008-08-17

  Ahhh, I gotta tell you, I'm not a fan of Panic At The Disco, so I don't really read any of their fan fictions. But I took a look at your profile and since you seemed cool, I checked this out.
  
  It was, in short, amazing. I loveloveloved it! It was spectacular, from the very first sentence right down to the ending. That's so sad, that Brendon jumped before Ryan had the chance to tell him...aww...it just makes my heart clench up.
  
  I wanna rate this, but it's green already so...you can just know that I adored this and thought it was moving. You should write more one-shots!

  Author's response

  Awe, you're too sweet. :]
  And I'm glad you read this, even if you don't read Panic at the Disco. :D
  That makes me really happy that you enjoyed it. Thank you for the review! :DDDDD

• This Was No Accident.

  (#) PatbtrthnPete 2008-08-17

  That was purely an art but it made me sad. After he went back to Ryan I thought it was going to be ok, then he jumped off.

  Author's response

  Awhe, I know.
  This was sad.
  But, when writing one-shots, I always like to make them a little tragic, yanno?
  I don't know. I'm just weird. Haha. XD
  
  Thank you for the review!

• This Was No Accident.

  (#) GoogleGeek 2008-09-23

  Well hi.
  I stumbled upon this on Google. I saw your name and thought 'Hey, she used to review me' and decided to read it.
  
  Now, half the time Rydon's annoy me because most of them involve Ryan and Brendon sucking each other and that's just naaasty. Thank God, I found this.
  
  This was different, fresh, exciting. For some reason, this line stuck out:
  "But, with one glimpse upon faded photographs, he was determined to fade from existence."
  I loved it. Thank you so much.
  Sorry this was long.
  xo
  P.S: I have something to ask you, contact me?
  P.P.S: Did New Moon by Stephenie Meyer influence this in anyway? Haha, just wondering.

  Author's response

  Hey, lookie here! A new reviewer.
  Glad to see a nice comment from a friendly face. :D
  
  Gah! That was one of my favorite lines as well. I'm glad you pointed that out.
  
  Hm, no, this wasn't influenced by New Moon. I had written this before I read that book. :D
  
  Thank you for the review!

• This Was No Accident.

  (#) mooniexmisfit 2008-11-08

  ohhhhmy gosh. i haven't been on here.
  in for fucking ever.
  jeeesusth.

  Author's response

  Man, neither have I.

• This Was No Accident.

  (#) -NonExistent 2009-02-28

  Oh. My. GOD.
  This was fucking EPIC. Wow. Just... wow. Okay, I'm going to try to pull myself out of this speechless state, so I can actually review properly.
  This story was amazing. Like, seriously. Wow. Gaah, I can't write with this state of mind. Sorry.
  
  Just know that I truly LOVED this.
  Thank you.
  xx

  Author's response

  Awh! Thanks!
  I'm really glad you liked it. :D
  Although, it's sort of hard to believe I'm still receiving reviews on this story.
  Anyway, thank you!!

• This Was No Accident.

  (#) charliexbrown 2009-04-25

  Wow, that was unexpected! It is a nice in-depth build up, and different from normal Rydons. (and I don't even read Panic fanfics! It was the featured story today. ^^)
  Constructive criticism? I think you over-elaborated in the first bit. There were a few sentences a little too wordy. But it's nice to see people who actually have a wide vocabulary on here these days. =D
  Really good story! x

  Author's response

  Woah, it was featured?! I really need to go on here more often. Lol.
  
  Well, I'm glad you enjoyed this story. And I'll be sure to take your constructive criticism into account. I do tend to get a little wordy. :]
  
  Thank you for the review!

• This Was No Accident.

  (#) mysilentromance 2009-10-21

  This was intense! The ending was really shocking. I never would have guessed it x_x
  
  x mysilentromance

  Author's response

  Aw, thank you! :3

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