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• Summer of Contracts

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-03-26

  Interesting update. I liked the attack as well as Dumbledore's ridiculous reactions.
  
  The letter from Narcissa unfortunately added a definite timer to her situation as well.
  
  Looking forward to more.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) DrT 2008-03-26

  Good solid chapter. I like Hermione's reactions -- v. intelligent, esp the arithmancy dodge.
  Harry and Luna are developing nicely, and it was a great scene at Hogwarts!

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Cateagle 2008-03-26

  And events conspire to push Harry & Susan together even as Harry & Luna further develop their relationship. I do think Dumble's absurd reactsions are going to come back and bite him, big time. For that matter, his heavy-handed move with Shacklebolt isn't going to do Shack much good, either.
  
  Hermione seems to be a most supporting friend and I suspect Dumbles isn't going to know what hit him when she teams up with Harry, Luna, and Susan to redefine the "game". I suspect the only one likely it less will be Tom and that Scrimgeour won't like it much better than Dumbles will.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) steve2668 2008-03-26

  Very enjoyable update Now all that is needed is to get susan and luna contracted before they go back to school so thst it can be rubbed in dumbles nose. Haha
  
  Keep up the good work i look foreward to further updates

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Terdwilicker 2008-03-26

  Good chapter. Your writing has improved.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) watertiger 2008-03-26

  I am waiting to see who Harry contracts for Black family line or the wife for Potter line. Will Dumbledore and his Order of Flaming Chickens be caught or punished?
  
  

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Vanir 2008-03-26

  Oh gods, that's one stupid old man.
  
  I thoroughly love your slow-boil style here. Things are coming to a head, but not very quickly. Now, I'd love to see Harry send a letter to Ol' Fumbles, saying that if he tries to negotiate for him without his expressed consent, Harry would be seen no more. That'd send the old coot up the wall, right?
  Thanks.
  
  Vanir

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Wolfric 2008-03-26

  I continue to enjoy your fine story. The action was well portrayed and Dumbledore having Filch screen his visitors was fun. I bet Harry's talk with Scrimgeour will have some interest as well. Thanks for writing. W.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) michaeljohn 2008-03-26

  Once again, another excellent chapter. Relationships are moving along. I think Luna's sadness may not be justified. Lying in a hospital bed in pain can make you think seriously about things, take it from me. I reassessed many things over two days.
  But, we will see what happens.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Immortal7 2008-03-26

  Loved the chapter. While I was hoping that i turned into a H/L/Hr story I like Susan as well. It is a nice touch on how you brought Narcrissa into it. i wonder how Pansy will take not being with Draco and having someone else take her place. Any way the whole way you handled Albus was great and looking forward to more. That and I like the small touch of Ginny liking Harry only for his fame and not the money, making me not hate her for just since she is still behaving like a kid, but brings to question the motives behind Arthur and Molly for allowing it. any way until next time later.

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