- And events conspire to push Harry & Susan together even as Harry & Luna further develop their relationship. I do think Dumble's absurd reactsions are going to come back and bite him, big time. For that matter, his heavy-handed move with Shacklebolt isn't going to do Shack much good, either.
Hermione seems to be a most supporting friend and I suspect Dumbles isn't going to know what hit him when she teams up with Harry, Luna, and Susan to redefine the "game". I suspect the only one likely it less will be Tom and that Scrimgeour won't like it much better than Dumbles will.
- Oh gods, that's one stupid old man.
I thoroughly love your slow-boil style here. Things are coming to a head, but not very quickly. Now, I'd love to see Harry send a letter to Ol' Fumbles, saying that if he tries to negotiate for him without his expressed consent, Harry would be seen no more. That'd send the old coot up the wall, right?
(#) michaeljohn 2008-03-26Once again, another excellent chapter. Relationships are moving along. I think Luna's sadness may not be justified. Lying in a hospital bed in pain can make you think seriously about things, take it from me. I reassessed many things over two days.
But, we will see what happens.
- Loved the chapter. While I was hoping that i turned into a H/L/Hr story I like Susan as well. It is a nice touch on how you brought Narcrissa into it. i wonder how Pansy will take not being with Draco and having someone else take her place. Any way the whole way you handled Albus was great and looking forward to more. That and I like the small touch of Ginny liking Harry only for his fame and not the money, making me not hate her for just since she is still behaving like a kid, but brings to question the motives behind Arthur and Molly for allowing it. any way until next time later.
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