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Soul Purpose
(#) cutegirl12356 2008-03-29
i love it...love it...love it.
Please write more!Author's response
Thanks. I will when I have time ;)Soul Purpose
(#) crystalcrash 2008-03-30
+1 Moving
Beautiful chapter. I'm glad you stayed up so late writing it ;)
The part about her grandmother was really sad, and i think it's something most people can relate to. Talking to her brother was also... how can i put this... real? The whole thing about him being mad about her leaving home and going after her dream is something that happens too often. Too many parents want their children to study, get a job, have a family - do the "right thing" when what we should really do is chase our dreams, do what we really want, what makes us truly in life. I'm sure her brother will probably end up going to a show of hers and seeing how happy she really is, then everything will be alright between them, and he'll be happy for her. Okay, i shut up about this now ;) hahaha I always get carried away!
Gerard taking care of her... and him saying she doesn't need to be so strong all the time is so true. Who wouldn't want Gerard brushing their hair and taking care of them?! hahaha He is too sweet.
I hope Defne makes up with her bandmates soon, which she probably will. It's normal for them to be worried, she's the only girl in the group. And they love her xD
Anyways, great chapter. Really long so we're all happy about that! I'l be waiting for more, as always. In the meantime i'll try and get a chapter of my own up... and praying its as good as yours ;)
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Heee, thank you =D I'm glad you like it!Rating < 3
The part about her grandmother is actually something I too, can relate to because my grandmother is also sick so I had some real hard moments writing those lines - stopped and called my grandmother at 11 pm to talk to her. But when I was done with that part, I somehow felt better. And couldn't stop writing and this is what came out, so...
I agree with everything you said about the conflict we all experience about what our parents want from us and what we really want to do with our lives. In Defne's case she has suffered from her choices so far, but things are starting to brighten up at last. And yeah, of course, who wouldn't want Gerard to brush their hair? Hahah xD He is the sweetest!
About her brother and the fight with Zack... Well, I don't wanna give away too much but I'll try not to disappoint you guys!
Thanks again and I'll be waiting for your update patiently. And I know it's gonna be good =)
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(#) alyssainwonderland 2008-03-30
I'm mad at myself for reading this so quickly, because now I want another chapter really soon. :)
But, as always, the chapter is great. The whole fight between Defne and Zach was really believable, for the right reasons.
The part about her grandmother kind of hit home with me, too, because that's sort of like the way my grandmother died. Like the reviewer before me said, it's something that a lot of people would be able to relate to, and I just happened to be one of them.
And the whole bit with Gerard and Defne made me squeal, just a little bit. I love all the fluff between the two of them.
Basically, I love it. I'll try to be good and wait patiently for another update.Author's response
Hehe, thankies! And don't be mad at yourself, another chapter will possibly come soon, not really soon but not late either :)
I'm sorry for your grandmother... But I guess we've all got to experience these things sooner or later. That's why most of us are able to relate to this sort of thing...
And heee, I love the fluff between them, too. I smile all the while as I'm writing those parts =D
Thanks for the patience!
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(#) nabilah 2008-04-02
I have lost all comprehensible responses so I will settle for this:
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xD Thank you!!! I love you too =)Soul Purpose
(#) jewelstar105 2008-04-03
Once again another triumph. The bit about the germs and domestos made me laugh for ages don't know why it just tickled me! haha . Great fluff, more, more, more, it is written so well you almost want to put yourself in defne's shoes for a while and imagine gerard is doing those things to you, well i do anyway :) Hey i can dream can't i!!Author's response
Yeah the domestos thing just sorta came out of the blue and I thought it would be a good analogy and hey, I think it's funny too =)
Of course you can dream, hehe, that's one of the main reasons I read fan fiction! Who would't dream of Gerard anyway? xD
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